托福写作解析：居住地方对幸福影响.docxVIP

Word文档下载后（可任意编辑） 第 第 PAGE 1 页 共 NUMPAGES 1 页 托福写作解析：居住地方对幸福影响  托福备考：2019托福写作范文解析：居住地方对幸福影响  托福考试精品VIP提升课程  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The place people choose to live has more effect on happiness than the job people choose.  【译文】你是否同意或不同意以下观点：人们选择居住的地方对幸福的影响比人们选择的工作更大。  【解析】在正式下笔前，你可以花点时间捋清思路。写下你想在文章中展开论述的要点，以及打算使用的论证手法，这将有助于文章条理清晰。  Becoming an adult is fraught with many difficult decisions, such as choosing a career and where to live. Stresses come with every job. If where you live does not help you escape the stresses of work, then you will never be happy, no matter how good a job you have.  【译文】成年人的世界总是充满了艰难的抉择，比如选择一个职业和在哪里生活。每一份工作都有压力。如果你住的地方不能帮助你摆脱工作的压力，那么无论你的工作有多好，你都不会快乐。  【解析】论点是引导文章的主要思想或观点，读者可以从文章论点中了解你想要表达的关键信息。无需赘言，你只需用一句话阐明论点，简明扼要地表达论述思路。总而言之，言简意赅。  I have a cousin in California who has a terrible job at a hotel. She could move back to the East Coast and maybe find a better job, but she says she would not dream of it; she loves the Californian weather and lifestyle too much. She told me that even though work is terrible sometimes, whenever she has a bad day she just goes for a walk on the beach and then feels better. There will always be something stressful or unpleasant about your job. My cousin lives by the philosophy that the quality of life does not have to depend on your job. As long as you live a full and adventurous life after hours work hours, you can be happy. In order to accomplish living life completely, I believe location is very important.  【译文】我在加州有个表亲，她在一家旅馆有份很糟糕的工作。她本可以搬回东海岸，也许会找到一份更好的工作，但她说那不是她所希望的;她非常喜欢加利福尼亚的天气和生活方式。她告诉我，尽管有时工作很糟糕，但每当她心情不好的时候，她就会去海滩散步，然后感觉好多了。你的工作总是会有压力或不愉快的事情。我的表姐生活的哲学是，生活的质量并不一定要依赖于你的工作。只要你在工作时间过了一段时间后，你就能过一种充满冒险精神的生活，你就会很快乐。为了活的更完整，我相信住址是非常重要的。  【解析】举例在托福独立写作中扮演着非常重要的角色，“真实可信、生动有趣、充实饱满”这三个要素决定了这个例子是否成功支撑了你的写作。没有具体例子，文章将缺乏“画面感”，大量的“讲道理”只能让文章读起来味同嚼蜡。  Even if you love you job, there are still plenty of hours in the week where you ar