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2012 年 12 月四级考试真题（第二套）作文及听力答案解析 Part I Writing 【审 题】 这是一篇图表类作文，图表显示的是美国劳工部公布的 2010 年失业率统计情况，从图表可看 出，受教育程度的高低与失业率成反比。根据要求，写作时，首先简要描述一下图表的内容：受教育程度 越高，失业的可能性越低；接着围绕这一主题进行阐述或评论，比如分析原因等，最后小结。 【思路一】第一段： 以总— 分— 总形式描述图表内容， 指出受教育程度越高失业率越低， 教育是有回报的。 第二段：分析这种现象产生的原因：受教育程度更高者通常知识范围更广，研究能力更高，对 新事物的反应更迅捷，人脉更广，因而在工作中更具有竞争力，下岗可能更低。 第三段：提出建议：现在的就业门槛越来越高，我们应该更努力学习，获取更多知识和技能。 【范文一】 【点 评】 Education Pays (1) As is demonstrated in the bar chart , (2) the higher (1) 总述图表 the degree of education one obtains, the less likely one is to be (2) “越,, 越 ,, ”句型描述图表趋势 unemployed. (3) For exampl e, in 2010, the unemployment rate (3) 引用具体数据，更具说服力 among people with doctoral degree (1.9%) is far below those holding a high school diploma (10.3%) . (4) The data here (4) 从图表得出结论，点题 definitely shows that education pays in lower unemployment rates. (5) It is not difficult to explain this phenomenon. (6) (5) 承上启下，引出下文的原因分析 People with higher education level usually have wider range of (6) 详细分析原因。运用排比 knowledge, higher research ability, quicker response to newly-sprung phenomena and wider social relationship. (7) (7) 得出结论。逻辑清晰 Therefore , they are more competitive in their career and less likely to be laid off. (8) Nowadays, (9) thresholds to large numbers of (8) 交代时代背景，为下面的建议做铺垫 professions have been greatly elevated because of the booming of high technologies in modern society and people with higher (9) 亮点表达： “门槛”“找到并保住工作” education will undoubtedly be easier to (9) land and hold a job . (10) So, as students, we should study harder, grasp more (10) 提出建议，自然收尾 knowledge and learn more skills so as to better prepare ourselves for the future ca