2010年10月30日雅思大作文范文及点评.pdfVIP

2010 年 10 月 30 日： Some people believe that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to the society, other people think that people have more responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人认为纳税已经是为国家做贡献的体现，有人认为 公民还有其他的社会责任，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见？ 范文： Nowadays, much controversy has been made concerningwhich is the citizens ’ unshakable obligation, to pay taxes or to serve other profound functions. Some people assert that great contribution has already been made by acting as honorable tax-payers. To voice my opinion , a citizen ’s duty should involve both increasing the governmental revenue and serving more significant functions. 点评：这篇题目是要讨论两方意见，但是主题观点已经确定是要支持公民纳税 以及论证公民还有其他责任， 这时可以用一方的观点句引导出主题观点， 但是注 意词汇的替换，例如：obligation = duty = responsibility; increase = multiply; revenue = tax; profound = significant. Indeed, a great many justifications could be found to prove that paying tax revenue is the compelling duty of every citizen. Government is the institution representing the benefits and interests of all the citizens, its responsibility covers sponsoring the homeless people, popularizing free medical care and prospering education industry, yet the ever-accelerating requirements always match against the declined resources and limited financial budget. Imaginably, to impose tax revenue could multiply the government ’s incomeso that more financial budget out of public purse could be utilized to strengthen the construction of infrastructure, to preserve the environment and even promote the comprehensive national strength. 点评：二段直接套入句型提出观点句：纳税是公民应尽的义务，接下来要证明 为何公民纳税是必要的以及有哪些利好。 话锋一转去解释政府是代表人们利益的 职能机关，政府要解决的问题很多，例如住房，医疗，教育（三大民生问题）， 但是，困难是日益上涨的需求和有限的财政预算以及减少的资源是互相矛盾的。 这样，很自然引起公民纳税的利好， 就是政府有钱去做利民的事情了， 例如加强 基础设施建设， 支持环保以及提高综合国力。 二段写作出现了一些来自阅读的亮 点表达法，例如 justifications （理由）；the institut