AMothersDaySurprise英语读后续写试题解析及范文赏析（公开课课件）.pptx

A Practical Guide To Continuation Writing; Have you ever given a surprise to your mother on Mother’s Day? What presents do you often prepare for your mother? ;help mother do housework;Step 2 Reading for the storyline;; ; Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.;The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. ;Basic elements (5W);Tips：细读首句，构思框架;Paragraph 1： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Paragraph 2： The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.;;;1.Groupwork:discuss and make up the following story in groups.;Paragraph 1： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Paragraph 2： The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.;Step 5: Writing and checking;Useful expressions;表吃惊： She felt surprised. Her eyes widened in surprise.她惊讶地睁大了眼睛。 表高兴快乐： She felt extremely happy. Her eyes danced with joy and happiness.她的眼里充满了喜悦和幸福。 The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 表感激感动： She was deeply touched/moved.她被深深的感动了。 She was so moved that tears streamed down her cheek.她感动得眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。;Paragraph 1： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Paragraph 2： The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.;Accuracy; As the twins