高考英语 读后续写：环境描写（原卷版）.doc

专题02 读后续写：环境描写（原卷版） 借景抒情、寓情于景是写作中常用的手法。恰当的背景场景描写有利于推动故事情节的发展，烘托人物的心理活动，给读者身临其境的感受。背景场景描写要有全貌有细节，有全景有特写，要点面结合，重点突出。可以描写事件发生的时间、地点、环境等，也可以描写人看到的景象或感受到的某种情绪。 注意：环境描写只是起画龙点睛的作用，环境描写不要写太长，且环境描写一定为你的内容服务，而不是为了看起来高大上。所以我也提醒大家写作的时候千万不要本末倒置，写一些无关紧要的套句或者环境描写只会对情节起到反作用。那么接下来我们先看看环境描写的常见作用以及常见的环境描写素材。 自然环境描写在读后续写中的作用 1.衬托或突出人物性格、心理等 2.暗示或推动故事情节发展 3.增添或烘托某种气氛和意境，奠定基调 4.揭示主题，深化主旨 1.气氛氛围（1） A heavy silence blanketed the room.（描写房间的寂静） A hush fell upon the class.?（描写教室寂静） The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.(描写屋内环境） An absolute darkness ruled the forest.（描写黑暗） It didn’t take too long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness.(描写森林变暗） There were a deathly stillness in the house.（描写死寂） There was a moment of sinister silence, then a multitudinous stirring of the leaves.（描写暴风雨前的死寂） An air of sadness settled over the group.?（描写悲伤氛围） It suddenly seemed frighteningly quiet. The air was charged with tension.（描写紧张气氛） The silence of the forest was ripped apart by a sound like a roaring wind.（描写狂风打破寂静） There was no view anywhere, nothing but the oppressive and silent scrub.（描写死寂的树林） 2.气氛氛围（2） the blue sky? 蓝天the songs of birds? 鸟鸣the thundering clouds? 雷霆万钧的云the fragile flowers ?娇嫩的花the green grass 青草the fragrant roses 芬芳的玫瑰the setting / rising sun 落日 / 冉冉升起的太阳?Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。 The night sky was lit up by flashes of light.??一道道灯光照亮了夜空。 The clouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky.??云彩扩散开来，几乎遮住了整个天空。 The sun was now high in the southern sky.??太阳正高挂在南边的天空上。 The sun went in, and the breeze became cold.??云层遮住了太阳，微风有了些凉意。 The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun.??在早晨的阳光下，薄雾涣然消散了。 The mountain area is covered entirely in dense jungle.??山区完全掩映在茂密的丛林中。 We climbed up a winding track towards a mountain refuge.??我们沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一处避难所。 The mountain top was covered with snow.??山顶被积雪覆盖。 The region is uninhabited except for a few mountain villages.??除了几个小山村之外，这个地区杳无人烟。 Bathed in the sunshin