2021年10月23日雅思考试机经·写作 - dress at work.docx

Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but they should be concerned about the quality at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 题目解析：题目需要回应的部分有两个：老板不该关注员工着装，该关注工作质量。这个题回应时，要注意自己的观点和所给观点的关系。如果自己觉得老板要关注工作质量，“也”应该关注着装，那自己的观点应该是部分同意所给观点；如果觉得两项都不重要，也是部分同意（当然应该不好写）；如果觉得应该注重着装，不该看工作质量，那才是完全不同意。 建议思路：应该更多关注工作质量，但是穿着也是需要注意的。 主体段1:应该更多关注工作质量 1. 工作质量是企业生存核心：例如老师的教学产出， 2. 工作质量体现了员工的能力和态度。 主体段2:穿着应该也需要关注 1.穿着体现了工作者的工作面貌(态度），都需要穿着得体。 2.企业形象，专业度，特定场合都对工作服有要求，例如银行职员应该穿着正装，某些工厂要求员工穿安全服。 范文： To conduct an enterprise long and prosperously, certain criteria are created in the hope of indicating the key performance for each one involved in its business. Some believe that the dress code is not the one that steals managers’ attention but the eminence of work. In regard to companies of different industries, I believe both norms are necessary. The excellence is the critical baseline at work and requires close attention for employers. In comparison to uniforms or fancy dresses at the workplace, the solid output of one’s job is the core of the business. For example, a teacher in casual clothes can give marvelous lectures and a computer programmer in grubby sweaters and pants is able to guarantee the smooth running of a software as well, both of whose wears are not the primary concern for their bosses. As well as its significance for corporations itself, the work results of high standards are also the reflection of their competence of and attitude to their positions, so the quality should indeed possess more attention of company. However, the attire is another focal point for those in senior positions for several causes. For one, a suitable set of clothing or a professional package of makeup also represents the eagerness to do the job well. As for certain sectors that requires favorable image or security, a compulsory dress code and uniforms are essential for like bankers and miners. Another factor, context, should also get in