2021年8月28日雅思考试机经-写作.docx

大作文 2021年8月28日雅思考试机经·写作 School leavers prefer to travel or work rather than directly going to university. Are there more advantages or disadvantages on their study? 写作思路： gap year是雅思写作一个老题，本题问的是这个选择的优劣势。 优点可以从历练积累、视野开阔、变得独立这三个点进行递进称述； 缺点可以考虑间隔年后不再返校进行论述，但是因为社会对于个人资质要求越来越高，这种情况不太会发生。 除了例文中写的优缺点，职业规划的思考、安全问题也是比较好写的点。 It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. This trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time. The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life. However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career. My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this. 词汇推荐 中文 词性 evident 明显