2018雅思- 犯罪类 -写作汇总.pdf

2018年3 月3 日雅思写作考题回忆 权威点评 本次小作文为静态多饼题，整体文章难度不大。可将主体段分三段，分别写三 个饼图。另外注意因本图为纯静态图，要注意比较句式的多用型。大作文为犯 罪类，难度要稍微高一些。但是万变不离其宗，注意双边优缺点都要讨论到。 开头段或结尾段给出明确的观点。 Task 2 话题分类 犯罪类 题目 In most countries,prison isthemost common solution forthe problem ofcrime.However,themoreeffective solution istoprovide peoplewithbetter education sothatthey donotbecomecriminals. Towhat extent doyou agreeor disagree. 参考范文 原创范文 In many countries,it isnotuncommonthat deprivingthefreedom of criminalsaspunishment.Yet,someargueprovidingbetter education maybeamoreeffective solution.Asfar asIam concerned,I disagreewiththeabovementioned statement,asboth education and imprisonment areeffectiveintermsofpreventingpotentialcrimes, whileprisoningcriminalsalsoexertspositiveeffectsintermsof fairnessanddeterrent effects. Tobeginwith,offeringbetter education strengthensindividuals’ competitiveedgewhich consequently increasestheirjob opportunities.Thismeasure,from along-termperspective,will effectively lower thecriminalrate,aslowerunemploymentrate tendstocausehigher criminalrates.Furthermore,goodmoral educationhelpspeople,especiallytheyoung,todevelopupright moralvaluessuch ashonesty,fairnessandrespect for others.Most importantly,they willlearn howtotellright from wrong.Therefore, educationplaysaparamountroleinpreventingcrimes. Besidesproper education,prisoningisalsoeffectivetonip crimesin bud.Imprisoningcriminalsforwhat theyhavecommitted showsa powerfuldeterrent againstpotentialcrimes.Deprived offreedom,on theotherhand,most ofthemmayberemorseful for theirprevious action