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;;作文例析;邀请信;相应的解题步骤+高分策略;Two simple sentences： 1. He didn’t pass the exam. 2. His family were disappointed. ;1. He didn’t pass the exam. 2. His family were disappointed.;More noun clauses!;Sometimes, clauses are tedious（冗长）, so, why not refine them?;Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed. ;The reason for his family’s being disappointed was his not passing the exam.;Some students disagreed on it, who thought if they stick to exercise, they didn’t need to take tonic. And parents used tonic to pay attention to their children’s health, which will make the students under the pressure. what’s more, the price of the tonic is very high. Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.;Some students disagreed on it, who thought if they stick to exercise, they didn’t need to take tonic. And parents used tonic to pay attention to their children’s health, which will make the students under the pressure. what’s more, the price of the tonic is very high. ;Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.;相应的解题步骤+高分策略;我们的同学可能忽略了什么？;问题之一:用错衔接手段请看学生习作1;问题之一:用错衔接手段阅读学生习作2,并试修改;问题之一:用错衔接手段阅读学生习作2,并试修改;问题之二:思维跳跃请看学生习作3;问题之二:思维跳跃阅读学生习作4,并试修改;问题之三:过于追求高级表达而有损连贯性请看学生习作5;范例1（全文连贯流畅） Dear Bill, How are you doing? I need to accomplish a survey about the winter holiday in Britain and China, so I am writing to exchange some information with you. When it comes to the winter holiday, we Chinese students all feel excited about it, because we can have a long break of about 20 days. During the holiday, ;many of us will go on a trip, from which we can not only broaden our horizons but have fun. Others will take part in some winter camp