2014年12月年四级考试答案解析（一）.docx

2014年12月大英语四级考试真题(一)答案与详解 Part Ⅰ Writing 审题思路 本篇题目一改过去常写的议论文，要求写对自己影响最大的大同。根据题目要求，写作重点应当是描述，而不是议论。考生首先应直接或间接地引出主题，然后通过具体事例阐释该同对“我”产生重大影响的原因,最后发表议论，照应前文，升华主题。由此可知，题目要求写一篇夹叙夹议，以叙述为主的作文。 写作提纲 一、提出观点：同“Tom”改变了“我”（be subject to being pessimistic，strive to encourage, appreciate) 二、阐释主题：1、在他的帮助下，我发现英语没那么难(be confused about，make progress) 2、他教我如何面对挫折(live through setbacks) 三、升华主题：l、“Tom”让我认识到了自信和乐观的重要性(the significance of self-confidence and optimism) 2、这种态度使人受益终身(benefit people all his life) 范文点评 高分范文 精彩点评 A Classmate Who Has Influenced Me Most in College ① Once upon a time, I was not so confident about my study and was subject to being pessimistic when confronted with frustrations. ② However, I found myself gradually changing as Tom, one of my classmates in college, strived to encourage me. ③ I really appreciate his help. ④ I used not to be good at English； however, whenever I was confused about the teacher’s explanation, he always interpreted it to me in- an explicit way. Gradually, I found English not so difficult and made progress day by day. ⑤ In addition, it was Tom who kept guiding me how to live through all kinds of setbacks in life. ⑥ I’ll never forget the very day when I failed my speech contest and I was overwhelmed and ashamed.⑦ Tom told me that nobody can defeat a person if he is determined to stand up to every failure. ⑧With his encouragement, I regained confidence, realizing that optimism was always the key to success. ⑨ Thanks to Tom, I eventually learned the significance of self-confidence and optimism. They not only serve as indispensable characteristics of personality but also will benefit people all his life. ① ②通过描述那个曾经缺乏自信而且悲观的 “我”渐渐地有所改变引出文章主题——对 “我”影响最大的大同，他竭尽全力鼓励“我”。 ③承接上句，表达对他的感激之情。 ④列举具体事例在英语习方面对“我”的 帮助。 ⑤使用in addition衔接，不仅使语义连贯，而且层次分明。 ⑥⑦列举具体事例演讲比赛失败后他对“我” 的鼓励。 ⑧说明他对“我”的影响在他的鼓励下，“我” 重拾了信心，认识到乐观的重要性。 ⑨升华主题他使“我”认识到自信和乐观的重 要性。这种态度使人终身受益 加分亮点 be subject to 有…倾向 appreciate 感激 interpret 解释 indispensable不可或缺的 全文翻译 对