英汉互译课件-(2.8.6)--翻译症（2）.pptVIP

汉英翻译症（二） A Failure to Choose Imagic Words Introduction 用词鲜明倾向：一般情况下，英语倾向于多用动词，少用抽象的名词；多用形象、意义充实的词汇，少用抽象、意义虚泛的套词。 Examples 1、这座庙宇因为结构坚固，所以得以长久保存。 拙译：The prolongation of existence of the temple is due to its solidity of construction. 改译：The temple has endured because it was solidly built. Examples 2、鉴于高等学校的年龄分布偏高的情况，我们应当立即实行新的提前退休制度。 拙译：The age distribution of higher education faculty necessitates immediate implementation of innovative early retirement programs. 改译：Because there are so many older teachers in colleges and universities, we should immediately introduce innovative programs for early retirement. Examples 3、在这种情况下，只要使用起子就可将螺丝固紧。如果不是不把螺丝固紧，把手会掉下来。 拙译：In such a case, simple application of a screwdriver should be used to tighten screw. Failure to tighten the screw can eventually lead to disengagement of the handle. 改译：If this happens, simply tighten the screw with a screwdriver; otherwise, the handle may come off. Examples 4、否则，我们的工作将会一无所成。 拙译：Otherwise, there can be no achievements in our work. 改译：Otherwise, we can achieve nothing. 5、阅读新的出版物是非常重要的。 拙译：Reading of newly published materials is also important. 改译：It is also important to read newly published materials. Examples 6、昨天该公司开始发行一亿元外币B股。 拙译：The company began its issuance of 100 million foreign currency B shares yesterday. 改译：The company began issuing 100 million foreign currency B shares yesterday. Examples 7、我们必须集中精力，加强农业。 拙译：We have to concentrate our efforts on agricultural reinforcement. 改译：We have to concentrate on strengthening agriculture. Examples 8、这说明了这些企业管理松弛的原因。 拙译：This accounts for the unsoundness in organization of these enterprises. 改译：This accounts for the poor organization of these enterprises. Examples 9、真丝内衣柔性很好。 拙译：Silk undershirts are rich in elasticity. 改译：Silk undershirts are highly elastic. 10、必须改变评估工作、分配任务的方法。 拙译：The method of work evaluation and workpoints allotment should be changed. 改译：The method of evaluating work and allotting workpoints should be changed.