英汉互译课件-(2.10.8)--逻辑关系与复合长句翻译（1）.pptVIP

汉语流水长句的翻译方法（一） 1. 英汉长句的结构特点 流水句翻译步骤 首先析出命题(proposition) 将命题按照性质归类(conflation) 判断命题之间的逻辑关系（如总分、因果、推进、转折、并列等）(relation) 推断主题 (topic)，根据主题断句 选择合适的主谓结构作为主干安排核心信息，并配以从句、独立结构、介词结构等，安排次要信息(prominence) 考虑好句式的节奏、韵律(rhythm) 语篇结构 语篇 主题链 主题链 主题链 主题…主题 主题 …主题 主题…主题 命题…命题 命题…命题 命题…命题 析出命题 天目山林深人少，古树掩映，清泉石上流，雾生半山腰，如仙境一般 。 1、林深 2、人少 3、古树掩映（同第一命题） 4、清泉石上流 5、雾生半山腰 6、如仙境一般 推断主题 1、天目山的各项独特特征（分说） 2、天目山如同仙境（总说） Inadequate versions: Mt. Tianmu has dense forest and scarce population. Springs flow over the rocks and fog streams around the mountain sides. It is like a fairyland.（不连贯） Fairy-like, Mt. Tianmu, with springs flowing over the rocks and fog streaming around the mountain sides, is densely forested and scarcely frequented. (重心不对) 总分关系 Mt. Tianmu is like a fairy land. It is densely forested and scarcely frequented （ visited / inhabited）, with springs flowing over the rocks and fog streaming around the mountain sides. Densely forested and scarcely frequented, Mt. Tianmu is like a fairy land. Springs flow over the rocks and fog stream around the mountain sides.（翻译为两句） 总分关系 杭州市属7个县境内，北有超山，西有天目山，溯钱塘江而上，有富阳鹳山，桐庐瑶琳仙境、桐君山和严子陵钓台，建德灵栖三洞，新安江“千岛湖”等名胜，形成一个以西湖为中心的广阔旅游区。 The beauty spots in the seven nearby counties form a vast area for tourists with West Lake at its center.To the north of Hangzhou stands the Chao Hill,and to the west Mt.Tianmu.Coming up to the Qiantang River one finds oneself at Stork Hill in Fuyang County. Nearby in Tonglu County are the Yaolin Wonderland, the Tongjun Hill and the Terrace where Yan Ziling,a hermit of the Eastern Han Dynasty(25-220),loved to go angling by the Fuchun River. Jinde County boasts the three Linqi Caves and the Thousand-Islet Lake at the source of the Xin‘anjiang River.（郭建中） 铺垫-主旨 南湖花园城由中国保安集团武汉保安房地产开发公司开发, 位于于武汉武昌区内原南湖机场处, 离市中心仅十分钟步行的距离。 Nanhu Garden Residential Quarter, developed by Wuhan Baoan Real Estate Eevelopment Co.Ltd, a branch of China Baoan Group,