英汉互译课件-(2.9.6)--翻译症（3）.pptVIP

汉英翻译症（三） Parallel Structure Introduction 在将若干成分并列叙述时，既要照顾到它们语法形式的对等（如词性、语法成分、主动/被动等），也要照顾到抽象/具体性质的对等。 校训翻译 Dead Poet socity : Wellington School Tradition, honor, discipline, excellence 西点军校 Duty, Honor, Country 耶鲁大学 Truth and Light 香港大学 “格物明德” Knowledge and Virtue 华中科技大学校训: 明德　厚学 求是　创新 原来东九楼的译文是Illustrious?Virtue,?Erudite,Practical,?Innovation Virtue, Knowledge, Truth, Innovation Examples 1、需要木材用以建房、防洪。 误译：Timber is needed for construction and to withstand floods. 改译：Timber is needed to provide material for construction and to help withstand floods. Examples 2、代表们一致认为这是以后十年的重要问题，关系着提高人民的生活，和保护环境。 误译：The delegates agreed that these are vital issues for the next decade, both for people’s quality of life and for saving the environment. 改译：The delegates agreed that these are vital issues for the next decade, affecting both the quality of people’s lives and the preservation of the environment. Examples 3、他们一致建议，应该将更多资金用于发展科技，引进更加灵活的制度以保证经济领域和科研机构的人才流动，进一步努力以保证科研成果转化为工农业生产。 误译：They unanimously suggested that more funds should be injected into scientific development , that a more flexible system be introduced to help the transfer of talent between economic sectors and scientific institutes, and that more efforts are needed to accelerate the transfer of the fruit of scientific research into industrial and agricultural production. Examples 改译：The unanimously suggested that more funds should be allocated for scientific development, that a more flexible system should be introduced to facilitate the exchange of highly trained people between economic enterprises and scientific institutes, and that more efforts should be made to ensure that the results of scientific research are rapidly applied in industry and agriculture. Examples 4、因为我们控制的国土面积扩大，大量的银行钞票在乡村发行，农产品增加，以及工商业复苏，从7月底开始，货币流通量增加了。 误译：Since the end of July the amount of money in circulation has increased, owing to factors such as the expansion of the territory under our control, the diversion of more bank note