英汉互译课件-(2.11.7)--逻辑关系与复合长句翻译（2）.pptVIP

汉语流水长句的翻译方法(二) 长句的翻译，不仅要注意命题归类、主题的关系和重心突出，还要注意到句式的协调，和节奏的平衡。另外，恰当的运用好标点符号，也有利于突出主题，表明主题之间的逻辑关系。 连动句 广出猎，见草中石， 以为虎而射之，中石。没簇，视之， 石也，而复更射之，终不能复入石矣。（《史记〈李将军列传〉》 汉学名家Burton Watson 英译： Li Kuang was out hunting one time when he espied a rock in the grass which he mistook for a tiger. He shot an arrow at the rock and hit it with such force that the tip of the arrow embedded itself in the rock. Later, when he discovered that it was a rock, he tried shooting at it again, but he was unable to pierce it a second time. 长的连动句：译为两句 老关忙即跳下车去，摸摸腰间的勃郎宁，又向四下里瞥了一眼，就过去开了车门，站在门旁边。（《子夜》） （译文1）Old Guan quickly scrambled out of the car，placing his hand on the Browning at his side and glancing all round．Then he went round and opened the other door and stood holding it． （改译）Old Guan jumped out of the car. Feeling the Browning at his side, he looked around, then went along to open the door and stood by it． 连动句 紫鹃答应着，忙出来换了一个痰盆儿，将手里的这个盆儿放在桌子上，开了套间门出来，仍旧带上门，放下撒花软帘，出来叫醒雪雁。（《红楼梦》第82回） 译文：Zijuan，assenting，hurried out to fetch a clean spittoon，placing the used one on the table in the outer room．Having closed the door behind her，she let down the soft flower portiere before going to wake Xueyan．（杨宪益） （‘In that case,could you change the spittoon?’ ） （‘Certainly Miss.’ ） Leaving the full spittoon on a table in the outer room, Nightingale went promptly to fetch a fresh one, which she placed at the foot of the kang. Then, closing the door of the inner room carefully behind her and letting down the flower-patterned portiere, she went out to wake Snowgoose, taking the full spittoon with her. （ Minford闵福德） 来至荣府大门石狮子前，只见簇簇轿马，刘姥姥便不敢过去，且掸了掸衣服，又教了板儿几句话，然后蹭到角门前。 There , at each side of the stone lions which flanked the gates of the Rong Mansion, she saw a cluster of horses and palanquins. Not daring to go straight up, she first dusted her clothes and rehearsed Ban-er’s little repertoire of phrases before sidling up to one of the side entrance…(Hawkes, D.) But Granny Liu was too overawed by the crowd of sedan-c