英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--住校还是租房.docx

英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--住校还是租房 题目： Living in University Dormitories or Apartments in the Community 写作要求 Now many college students choose to rent an apartment to enjoy more freedom. Some say it’s quite normal as the students have mostly reached the age of adulthood while others are concerned about their immaturity and security. What is your opinion Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic Living in University Dormitories or Apartments in the Community You are to write in three parts. In the ? rst part, state speci? cally what your idea is. In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 审题思路 本题是一个典型的观点选择型 AB 的题目，对住校还是出去租房做出选择 ，可以从以下几方面入手 ： 思路 1：选择住校，说明住校有什么好处 ：比如同学之间的交流、学校信息的传递等 ；还可以简单说明租房有什么弊端 ，比如安全问题、费用问题等； 思路 2 ：选择租房，说明租房有什么好处：比如培养独立性 、与社会接触等 ；还可以简单说明住校有什么弊端，比如受到限制太多、没有私人空间等； 思路 3 ：住校和租房结合，说明这种做法有什么好处 ：这时候 就将上述好处综合起来说 。 范文赏析 Living in University Dormitories or Apartments in the Community I think it is better for college students to live on campus during their first two years, and then move into an apartment for off-campus life as juniors and seniors need the independence of off-campus life. Students’ needs change over four years, so should their housing . 引言部分 ：作者开门见山给出自己的观点：前两年住校后两年租房，并概述了原因——学生需求变化导致 ，表明下文将重点说明这种组合的原因. Living on-campus makes it easier to get oriented to the way things are done. The freshmen and sophomores can interact more with other tudents, including not only your roommates, but everyone in the dormitory. Living in the dormitory also makes a student feel more a part of the university community. There are more opportunities for becoming involved in university activities and networking with students and university administration. Living off