公开课howtopolishwriting学习课件.pptxVIP

公开课howtopolishwriting学习课件;第2页/共34页;第3页/共34页;;第5页/共34页;第6页/共34页;;书面表达高档次的给分范围和要求;;第10页/共34页;Strategy 1 应用高级词汇;basic/general;bad;Strategy 2 善用高级短语词组;words;Strategy 3 巧增修饰成分;常用的写作高级副词 ;Strategy 4 活用词性转换;Strategy 5 试换句子主语;(3) 巧用无灵主语 ① Suddenly I had a good idea. Suddenly a good idea ________________________ me. ② I didn’t know how to describe the beautiful scenery. The beautiful scenery was _________________. Words ________ me when I saw the beautiful scenery. ;Strategy 6 避免用词重复;;;;4. Hard work can lead us to success. →(强调句) It is hard work that can lead us to success. 5. We can realize our dream by working against time. →(倒装句) Only by working against time can we realize our dream . 6. When we are exposed to nature, we can feast our eyes on the wonders of nature. →(省略句) When ___________ nature, we can feast our eyes on the wonders of nature. ;Practice makes perfect !;Practice 现在正是春暖花开春游时节。你校学生会以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”为题，向高三学生作调查。请你根据下表所提供的调查结果并简要发表自己的看法，以　“Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?”为题，写一篇短文，上交学生会。;Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion on whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing. _________________________________. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and have some fresh air. ___________, they can also relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their studies. _____________________, about 35% of the students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. __________, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix all their attention on their studies.;Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a hea