读后续写康德卷解读2024届高考英语作文专题.pptxVIP

高三读后续写康德卷解读 The Day Mother Cried 读后续写题型解读 读：350词以内 写：150词左右（写满） 评分标准：二轮复习书P271 优秀档22-25: 丰富合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文融洽度高。 多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅 段落、语句间有衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯 目前时间安排：读5-7minutes 想10-13minutes 写15-20minutes 记叙文的阅读 Read for characters: emotional change; action; personalities Read for plots: development;conflict/problems; Read for settings: hidden clues Read for theme Read for language: style/feature Read for characters(人物角色） emotional change action emotional change: 第三段：Happy/excited---倒数第二段：pain/vulnerable— action: 第一段：自学函授课程；第二段：练习打字；第三至五段：得到新工作后失败了；第六段：换了一份底薪水工作，但仍在练习打字 Personalities: Determined, ambitious, persistent personalities Read for plots: development;conflict/problems; 倒数第二段：vulnerability(脆弱） pain tension broke sobbed My mother failed in her job at the radio station. Read for Theme Never give up courage to go ahead Read for settings:读背景信息 hidden clues 第二段：Mother would disappear into her sewing room to practice until midnight. 妈妈回家带上了一个二手打字机，每天做完家务就去练习打字，直至半夜。 最后一段：I knew there was something more going on in there than a woman learning to type. 妈妈换工作以后，每天晚上仍在练习打字。 a used typewriter(物件） Read for language: style/feature 原则：语言风格要与原文一致 丰富的动作类动词： sob broke put her face against my shoulder tap qualify for disappear into...to... reach out sit beside 丰富的形容词和副词： upset tired extremely happy slowly to understand said simply impressed a bit surpressed 句式丰富，长短结合： 1. As soon as the table was cleared....., mother would....(状从） 2.Sitting beside her on the couch, i began very slowly to understand.(非谓语） 3.I could sense her pain and the tesion of...that were interrupted by my arrival.(定从） 解题步骤四步走： 根据两段首句推理情节（走向，衔接，结局） 根据情节确定角色情感变化 补全中间内容（填充细节） 激活语言储备（动作/心理/场景/主题） 三大原则：action-response conflict-solution negative-positive 首句推理情节（走向，衔接，结局） 第一段：Two years later quit her old job infer 走向: Mother received a better job with higher pay. 衔接：My mother