2024高考英语 读后续写的衔接与连贯 公开课.pptx

Connection in Continuation Writing读后续写的衔接与连贯 Lead in W: Do you like the movie Sister 我的姐姐 ?M: I think Shen Teng did a job in Hi，Mom!你好，李焕英W: Well… Shen Teng is very humorous.M: But I think Yang Mi made a lot of money from A Writer’s Odyssey刺杀小说家.W: Well…M：A man and a woman was in a blind date相亲. The man failed to leave a good impression on the woman. What’s wrong with their conversation? There was no connection in their conversation. Connection in the continuation writingConnection between the two Paras and the original text (两段内容与原文的衔接)；Connection between the given sentences and their next sentences (所给句与随后句的衔接)；Connection between the ending of Para.1 and the given sentence(s) of Para.2(第一段的结尾与第二段所给句的衔接) ；Connection between the ending of the story and the theme.(最后落脚点与主题的呼应) Para.1: Suddenly, I saw a dog named Penelope who reminded me of Bella. Curious to know something about it, I clicked the dog’s website page…（所给句与随后句的衔接）I asked my husband Dillon to drive faster. As we arrived at The Humane Society ,（与原文最后一段—I…on their website when we were driving to the Humane Society的衔接） ...From the counselors’ words, I knew the dog was deserted again.（第一段结尾与第二段所给句的衔接) Para.2: I didn’t understand why she had been given up for a third time, and I didn’t care. I knew we were taking her home...(所给句与随后句的衔接）…Now, two and a half years later, she is sitting beside me on the sofa, trying to lick my face. (最后落脚点与主题的呼应theme: love, be responsible for pets) (taking her home, sitting beside me , lick my face体现与原文—she loved the dog and would adopt her的衔接)Example--the third model exam Have a tryThey met with each other at a party. She was so young and beautiful, while he was just an ordinary man. At the end of the party, he invited her to have coffee with him, which was to her great surprise, however, out of politeness, she accepted his invitation.Sitting in a nice cafe and not knowing what to talk about, they both felt very embarrassed. When the waitress