上海中考英语作文模拟专项练习.docxVIP

上海中考英语作文训练 一、Please write at least 60 words on the topic Give a like to School In the Air. (请以为空中课堂点赞为题, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格)。 提示： 1.空中课堂一个无墙的课堂； 2.空中课堂一个别样的课堂； 3.空中课堂一个难忘的课堂…… 经历了将近2个月空中课堂的你们, 请从自身的感受给空中课堂点赞并给出理由. (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文 Give a like to School In the Air I want to give a like to school in the air because it is a classroom without walls. We can study at home instead of going to school.Its a special class. We can use a mobile phone or a computer to communicate and study. We can also share educational resources. Whats more, it was an unforgettable class because we got to know more teachers and classmates from all over the country.We encourage each other and work together. 1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲作文。请以为空中课堂点赞为题, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。 2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：in the air；at home；instead of going to school.；share educational resources；got to know；all over the country；each other等。 句型：1. We can study at home instead of going to school.Its a special class．2.We can use a mobile phone or a computer to communicate and study．3. Whats more， it was an unforgettable class because we got to know more teachers and classmates from all over the country．4. We encourage each other and work together． 二、Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是李平，最近收到加拿大朋友Jack的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。 I’m doing a school project about how teenagers use computers each day. For example, how much time did you spend on a computer yesterday? What kind of things did you do? Wha