人教版初中英语八年级上册Unit 1Section B Writing共26张)-课件.pptVIP

How to Better a Piece of Writing （Go for it ！八年级上册 unit1）Teaching topic(教学主题)How to write travel diary(旅行日记) Are you happy about holidays and vacations?开心吗？Preparation Where did Mr Li go on vacation ?PreparationWho ？ Task 1Learn and know the?information of Writing elements(写作要素) How （weather）; When; Where; Who; What; How （feel）Before writing How （weather） （sunny） When （ July 25th ） Where （Haitang Park） Who （friends and Mr Li） What （boating；taking photos；eating some Rongchang bean jelly(凉粉)； going bikeriding … ） How （happy）Task 1.1The ?information of Writing elements(写作要素)about Mr Li How to write travel diary(旅行日记)Help怎么帮助李老师写出更好的旅行日记Task 2 In the morning, we tried boating, it was really exciting! At lunch time, we had some Rongchang bean jelly. They looked good, it tasted terrible. We visited Sweet faye floor(香霏楼), it was boring.After lunch, we walked along the lake , took a lot of photos, they were very beautiful. It was sunny, we went bike riding.We came back to the hotel late in the evening. ConstructionIs this passage good ？ Task 2.1 Task 2.2Better the layout (布局)Preparation Body: What(activities)Beginning: When, How(Weather),Where, Who Ending: How(Feelings)Construction In the morning, we tried boating, it was really exciting! At lunch time, we had some Rongchang bean jelly. They looked good, it tasted terrible. We visited Sweet faye floor(香霏楼), it was boring.After lunch, we walked along the lake , took a lot of photos, they were very beautiful. It was sunny, we went bike riding.We came back to the hotel late in the evening. I went to Rongchang Haitang Park on vacation last summer. lt was July 25th, it was a sunny day. I went to the Haitang Lake with my friends. We all felt tired but happy.Construction Better th