高中英语教学课件：读后续写之句子扩写结合1月首考）.pptx

Continuation Writing 续写时的问题情节不合理句子简单语言苍白主题抓不住无话可说时间来不及语法错误拼写错误 句子简单语言苍白无话可说 女孩打开她的礼物盒。The girl unwrapped her gift box. (主) (谓) (宾)句子扩写 Sentence expansion(informative, specific and vivid) 形容词，可以是一个形容词，也可以是并列形容词或者形容词短语。1.The ____________(天真的)girl unwrapped her ___________(精致的)gift box.2.______________________(好奇又兴奋), the girl unwrapped her gift box.3.____________________________________________________(满心喜悦), the girl unwrapped her gift box. 副词，修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或整个句子，指的是时间、地点、程度、方式等概念。 (_____)The little girl eagerly/ carefully/ merrily/ joyfully/ expectantly/ excitedly unwrapped her gift box (_____).innocentdelicateCurious and excitedFull of joy/ wild with joy/ overflowing with joy技巧1：使用形容词、副词 The girl unwrapped her gift box.女孩打开她的礼物盒。技巧2：使用介词短语1. ______________________________________________(毫不犹豫地), the girl unwrapped her gift box.2. _______________(惊讶地), the girl unwrapped her gift box. 3. The girl unwrapped her gift box __________________(非常小心地).4. The girl __________________________(黑色长发的) unwrapped her delicate gift box.Without any hesitation/ a second thoughtIn surprisewith long black hairwith great care The girl unwrapped her gift box.女孩打开她的礼物盒。技巧3：使用非谓语动词1. _________________________________(兴奋地尖叫着), the girl unwrapped her gift box.2. _________________________________(感受到了温暖), the girl unwrapped her gift box.3. _________________________________(受到妈妈鼓励), the girl unwrapped her gift box. Feeling a sense of warmth Screaming with excitementEncouraged by her mom注意：1.非谓语的选择要考虑状语和主句的主语是否一致，以及动词和主语的主被动关系；2.非谓语动词结构也可以放在句中或句尾，如果放在句中，需要一前一后出现两个逗号。请看下面例句：①The girl,?screaming with excitement, unwrapped her gift box. ②The girl unwrapped her gift box,?screaming with excitement. The girl unwrapped her gift box.女孩打开她的礼物盒。技巧4：使用with 复合结构/独立主格结构with的复合结构1. ______________________________(张大了嘴巴), the girl unwrapped her gift box.独立主格结构2. ____________________________(心狂跳), the girl unwrapped her gift box. 3. _______________________(眼睛闪耀光芒), the girl unwrapped