读后续写之情节衔接 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习.pptx

How to improve the coherence of plot in continuation writing读后续写之情节衔接 Problems:语言层面：词汇问题（如拼写错误、词性混用、选词不当） 语法问题（如动词时态误用、多谓语连用、无谓语等）内容层面：偏离主题 情节衔接问题 新增主人公 对话过多 续写情节脱离实际续写段落与段首句不衔接续写段落间连接不紧密续写情节与原文脱节Goal:to know how to make the plot more coherent by evaluating. 读后续写评分标准档次第一项第二项第三项第四项第五档(21-25分)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。内容丰富所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义的表达。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。1.续写段落与段首句衔接；2.续写段落间连接紧密；3.续写情节与原文融洽度高。Rules of coherenceEvaluationRead the two samples and find out the problems. Are they coherent with the given sentence? with the next paragraph？ with the text(espacially the end)?续写段落间连接不紧密 Sample 1: The end of Para1:__________________________ __________________________ the voice/footsteps/knockingmy eagerness to see my fatherHow to improve the coherence of plot？Tip:Pay attention to___________ the time Tip: Pay attention to_________________the noun/pronoun Especially sth that was not mentioned before续写情节与原文脱节原文末尾: ... I had just entered into our house, when I heard my mother calling me. I brushed away my tears and followed the sound of her voice into the dining-room.Why did mother call me to the dining room?How did I know the piano was bought by my father?Sample 2: Para1: 1._____________________________________ 2._____________________________________ my reaction after seeing the pianomother told me about the piano As soon as my father appeared, I hugged him tightly.How to improve the coherence of plot？原文末尾: ... into our house, when I heard my mother calling me. I brushed away my tears and followed the sound of her voice into the dining-room.Tip: Pay attention to___________ the placeSample 1: Tip: Pay attention to first/last _____ of the __________ characters action As soon as my father appeared, I hugged him tightly.Tips Review placetimeTip1: ________ and ________. (as soon as)(dining room) Tip2: _____________ and ____________________________ . (my father)(mother calling me; I hugged him) first/last action of the characters noun/pronounEspecia