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托福独立写作中应避免的开头方式

【小编导读】托福独立写作大家都希望能通过好的开头，可以吸引考官的注意，从而使他对你的作文有个好印象，可是，如果开头十分糟糕，它便足以 “完美”地祸害这次托福考试。新东方陈亚囡分享托福独立写作中应避免的开头方式……

俗话说“题好文一半”，一个好的托福写作开头的重要性不言而喻。 大家都希望能通过好的开头，可以吸引考官的注意，从而使他对你的作文有个好印象，可是，如果开头十分糟糕，它便足以“完美”地祸害这次托福考试。下面是考试专家为考生们总结的应避免的开头方式。

1、废话连篇急煞读者

失败案例：

Topic --Should college students be allowed to getmarried?

Thistopicisveryinteresting.Iamveryinterestedintalking about this topic. Because I am also a collegestudentandIamnotmarried……

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In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision toallowcollegestudentstogetmarried 。

2、观点不明态度暧昧

失败案例：

Topic--Should college students be allowed to getmarried?

Ithinkthistopicisveryhardtosay.BecauseIamstillverylittle,only17,andnotmarried,sothistopicisverydifficultforme……

3、渐行渐远离题千里

失败案例：

Topic---Itissaidthatnowadaysonecannotacquirethequalificationsandqualityessentialtosuccessthroughuniversityeducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?

Ithinktosuccess,wemusthavealotofimportantqualities. To have these important qualities, we mustlearn a lot of things, for example, English, music, andetc.Wecanlearnthesequalitiesfromourteachers,ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn frommanyplaces。

4、中式英语人见人跪

失败案例：

Topic1-Thehappiestmomentinyourlife

Inourlife,therearealwayssomemomentswhich

makeyourheartfloweropenedangrily……

Topic2-Thepopulationproblem

Thepopulationproblemisaverybigproblem.Forexample,inthecitycentersofShanghai,wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere.

Topic3- Istherefairnessintoday’sbusinessworld?

Ithinkintoday’ssociety,thereisnofairnessinthebusinessworld.Forexample,IalwayschopwhenIgooutbuythings……

Topic4-Theadvantageofbeinganiceperson

Being a nice person have many advantage. Ibelieveifapersonalwaysdoesbadthings,hewillget“baoying”.

5、语法错误惨不忍睹

失败案例：

Topic---If children behave