2023年上海高二年级英语作文训练及范文(基础篇提高篇 解析版).docxVIP

2023年上海高二年级英语作文训练及范文

PartA基础篇

名校真题

1.【上海外国语附属大境中学高二2022学年期中】

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.近期，某社区正在开展“让家园更美好”的活动。希望大家献言献计，为社区发展出谋划策。请你提出一个社区中存在的问题或需要改进的方面，并说出你的建议和理由。

内容包括：1.存在的问题和不足；2.你的建议和理由

【答案】

I’mgladthattheactivityof“MakingOurHomeBetter”isbeingcarriedoutandsuggestionsforcommunitydevelopmentarecalledfor.Aswecansee,thelastfewyearshaswitnessedgreatimprovementintheneighborhood.

However,therestillexistsomeproblems.Thecrucialoneisthatthereisashortageofplacesforculturalactivitiesinthecommunity,whichfailstomeettheneedsofresidents’leisureandentertainment.Thelackofentertainmentfacilitiesleadstodullsparetimelifeofresidents.

Therefore,itishopedthatthegovernmentwillstrengthentheconstructionofurbanculturalfacilities,ensuringenoughfundsforinfrastructure.Bydoingso,notonlycanresidentsenrichtheirdailylifebutalsogetasenseofbelonging.

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Hopefully,ourcommunitywillbebetterandbetter.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为社区发展出谋划策，提出一个社区中存在的问题或需要改进的方面，并说出建议和理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

需要：callfor→need 见证：witness→see 缺乏：shortage→lack 导致：leadto→resultin

2.句式拓展

倒装句变陈述句

原句：Bydoingso,notonlycanresidentsenrichtheirdailylifebutalsogetasenseofbelonging.

拓展句：Bydoingso,residentscannotonlyenrichtheirdailylifebutalsogetasenseofbelonging.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Thecrucialoneisthatthereisashortageofplacesforculturalactivitiesinthecommunity,whichfailstomeettheneedsofresidents’leisureandentertainment.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。）

【高分句型2】Therefore,itishopedthatthegovernmentwillstrengthentheconstructionofurbanculturalfacilities,ensuringenoughfundsforinfrastructure.（运用了that引导主语从句和现在分词作状语。）

【高分句型3】Bydoingso,notonlycanresidentsenrichtheirdailylifebutalsogetasenseofbelonging