读后续写之动作描写技巧+课件 高三英语作文专项.pptxVIP

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TeachingAims：bystudyingtheexamples,wecanhelpstudentslearntheactionpattern.bypracticingexercise,wetrytohelpstudentsputtheskillsintousecorrectly.

lookattheparagraphyandthinkhowitiswritten(3.8周练PassageB)Rushing,heloweredhisshoulderandcrashedintothebear.ButitonlyseizedBuddytightly.Benham’sheartjumped.Heshoutedandthrewastoneatthebear.Nothing.Hefoundouthiscanofhairspray(喷雾).Hetriedfiringitimmediatelyatthebear.Abrightredcloudenvelopedit,andthebeardroppedthedogandranoffintothewoods.

读后续写作为记叙文，其核心只有一个，那就是“人”。因此一切的笔墨，都是为了塑造人物形象，使人物更加饱满。Howtomakeyourwritingvividandattractive?最为重要的描写有五类：环境、动作、心理、情绪、语言

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A之句式①S+V1.andV2.老师表扬了我们。Theteacherpaisedus.CombineachainofactionstogethernoddedwithsatisfactionthumbedupatusDividetheactionintoseveralsteps

他掏钱给乞丐。Hepulledoutmoneytothebeggar.reachedintothepocketpulledoutahandfulofchangegaveittothepoorbeggarA之句式②S+v1.,v2.andv3.CombineachainofactionstogetherDividetheactionintoseveralsteps

A之句式②S+V1.,V2.andV3.Followtimeorder他拥抱父母。Hehuggedhisparents.stooduphuggedhisparentssmiledDividetheactionintoseveralstepsCombineachainofactionstogetherHestoodup,huggedhisparentsandsmiled.

2.歌手唱歌(thesingersang.)3.我匆忙上学。(Ihurriedtotheschool.)1.父亲做蛋炒饭。(Hemadefriedrice）Iputonmycoathurriedly,grabbedmybagandrushedtoschoolthismorning.Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.Hetookouteggsfromthefridge,crackedthemintoabowl,andwhiskedthemwithaforktohelpthesisterstomakefriedrice.Exercise

C之句式①S+v.,doinganddoing凸显同一对象同时发生不同的动作女孩静坐。ThegirlsatunderthesunsetThegirlsatunderthesunsetreadthenewspaperlistenedtomusicThegirlsatunderthesunset,?reading?thenewspaperand?listening?tomusic.