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三个原则原文一致性原则正能量原则曲折性原则

四个步骤通读全文，理清脉络细读首句，构思框架增加细节，展开续写修改润色，整洁誊写

七个“不1、不增加人物2、不添加旁支情节3、不用过多对话4、不用负能量结局5、不偏离原文6、不在文末设置悬念7、不违背逻辑常理

一、情节构思宏观：第一段首句与第二段首句定第一段内容第二段句首与正能量结局定第二段内容微观：三个构思模板actionresponse原则conflictsolution原则negativepositive原则

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Modelessay“No,”Isaidquietly,“staynearmeanddonttalk.Ilookedforthemotherbearbutcouldntfindher.Isteppedbackwardslowly.Theyoungbearkeptaneyeonusbutdidntcalloutforitsmother,whoIknewhadtobecloseby.Afterwhatseemedlikeforever,theyoungbearjumpedofftherockandranaway.Ifinallystartedbreathingagain.IturnedbacktoChristinaandsawfearfilledhereyes.“ItsOK.Itookherhandagain.“Stickwithme,andyouwillbefine.”

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actionresponse原则某个角色做出行动，引起另一个角色的反应Afterwhatseemedlikeforever,theyoungbearjumpedofftherockandranaway.Ifinallystartedbreathingagain.

conflictsolution原则抓住故事中心矛盾，合理构思抓住中心矛盾是构思情节的关键1.角色之间的矛盾2.角色与环境的矛盾3.角色与自己内心的矛盾

conflictsolution原则IturnedbacktoChristinaandsawfearfilledhereyes.“ItsOK.Itookherhandagain.“Stickwithme,andyouwillbefine.”“Givemeyourhand,Sean!shecalled.Holdinghandswithoutstretchedarms,wecouldntreacharoundevenonesideofthetreetrunks.ItoldChristinasomefactsabouttheredwoodtre