高中英语2024届高考读后续写动作描写素材（三种句式+高分替换词+常用动作）.doc

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高考英语读后续写动作描写素材

一、三种句式

1.独立主格

眼泪

Tearswellingupinhereyes,shethankedthepolicewith/inatremblingvoice.

眼泪夺眶而出，她用颤抖的声音向警察表示感谢。

Myspiritssank,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.

我的情低落，泪水顺着脸颊流下来

眼睛

Eyesfilledwithregretfultears,sb.dosth.

眼里充满遗憾的泪水，某人做某事

Eyesglitteringwithrelief/joy,sb.dosth.

眼里闪烁着欣慰/喜悦，某人做某事

Eyeswideninginjoy/disbelief/surprise/shock/fear,sb.dosth.

眼睛因喜悦/难以置信/吃惊/震惊/害怕而睁大，某人做某事

脸/心/肢体

Faceblushingscarlet,heapologizedforwhathehaddone.

脸红着，他为自己所做的事道歉

Heartburning/filledwithfrustration,sheloweredherhead.

心在燃烧/充满沮丧，她低下了头

Heartpounding/beatingwithhappiness,heleaptintotheair.

心因快乐而跳动着，他跳了起来

Arms/legs/musclesachingandkneesshaking/trembling,Isatdown.

胳膊/腿/肌肉疼痛，膝盖颤抖，我坐了下来。

2.非谓语

Consideringthethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.

Feelingextremelyangry,shedashedoutoftheroomlikeawind.

Havingknownwhathadhappened,shesetaboutdealingwiththeissue.

Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,tryingtocatchitsattention.

Seeingthehelicopter,wecriedout“Help!”,wavingourhandslikemad.

Todistractthebear,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.

3.时间状语从句（while/when/as/themoment）

普通版：Suddenly,Maryfoundanenvelope.

进阶版：WhileMarywasthinking,shecaughtsightofanitemonthetable.Shewalkedtowardsitandfoundanenvelope.

普通版：Isawafriendofmine.

进阶版：AsIwaswalkinginthepark,Isawafriendofmine.

二、高分替换词

1.替换“sb.dosth.”某人做某事

managetodosth.设法做某事

succeedindoingsth.成功做某事

achieve/accomplishsth.实现/完成某事

[原句]Stevesavedthelittlegirl.

[改写]Stevemanagedtosavethelittlegirl.

Stevesucceededinsavingthelittlegirl.

Steveachievedtherescueofthelittlegirl.

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struggletodosth.努力/奋斗做某事

makeeffortstodosth./makeanefforttodosth.努力做某事

makeeveryefforttodosth./sparenoefforttodosth.竭尽全力做某事

strivetodosth/striveforsth.(过去式strove)努力、奋斗做某事

can’thelpdoingsth./feellikedoingsth.情不自禁做某事/想要做某事

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