2023年北京卷英语高考作文深度解读+优秀范文讲义.pdf

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假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为题的

社团活动他发来邮件询间你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括1.活动形式;2.活动内容

注意:

1词数100左右

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

解思路(列好后三审)

1写信目的

2具体建议

3表达希望

DearJim

DelightedlyhearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitythemedBeijing,Iam

writingtomakemysuggestionsfortheevent.

Tobeginwith,Isuggestorganizingawalkingtouraroundthecitytoexplorethegreen

spacesinBeijingwhichwillallowparticipantstoexperiencethebeautyofthecitysparksand

gardenswhilepromotingeco-friendlytransportation.Anothereffectiveactivityisplantingtrees

tocontributetothecitysgreenefforts.

Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful.Imlookingforwardtoparticipatinginthiseventand

promotingenvironmentalawarenesstogether.

Yours,

LiHua

非常高兴听到您计划组织以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，我写信来提出一些活动建议首

先，我建议组织一次步行游览城市的活动，探索北京的绿色空间，这将让参与者在推广环保

交通的同时，体验城市公园和花园的美丽。另一个有影响力的活动是种树，为城市的绿化工

作做出贡献。我希望这些建议有所帮助。我期待着参与这个活动，与大家一起促进环保意识。

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DearJim

ItsgreattohearthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeofBeijing..I

wouldsharemysuggestionswithyou!

Firstly,IsuggestyouincludeavisittosomeofBeijingsfamousparkssuchastheSummer

PalaceandtheTempleofHeaven.Notonlyaretheybeautifulandsceniclocations,buttheyalso

containrichculturalandhistoricalsignificanceSecondly,youcouldorganizeatreeplanting

couldbeacollaborativeeffortwithlocalvolunteersorenvironmental

organizations.Finally,youcouldencouragemembersofinthecity.Thishelpsraiseawareness

aboutkeepingthecityclean

Ihopethesesuggestionsgiveyousomeinspirationforyourclubactivity