2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项读后续写：i人变e人的夏令营 讲义素材.docxVIP

续写：i人变e人的夏令营（改变人生态度，认知成长）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

ThisFridaybroughtamixofemotions—bothexcitementanddisappointment—allbecauseofaflyerfromschool.WhenIgothome,Mumsawtheflyerinmyhandandasked,“Whatsthis?”

“Aflyerforafive-dayartcamp,”Iexplained.“ButEmilycantgo.”

“Wouldyouliketoattend?”Mumasked.“Youvealwayslovedart.”HerwordsremindedmeofwhatEmilyhadsaidearlier:“Tessa,youretherealartist.MybrotherthoughttherosesIpaintedwererocketships.”Isighed.Mumpattedmyback.SheknewIhadahardtimejumpingintosomethingwithnofamiliarfacesaround.“Maybenextyear.”

“Maybe,”Iechoed.ThenItoldMumIwantedtogooutsidetodrawtheWestonspinetree(松树).Shenoddedwithanencouragingsmile.

AsIwalkedintothebrightsunshine,Icouldnthelpbutthinkabouttheartcamp.IwishedIfeltalittlebitbraver.Emilycouldmakefriendswithawholebusofkidsintenminutes,butmystomachfeltlikealittleboattossedinaheavystormwhenIwassurroundedbystrangers...BythetimeIstarteddrawing,Ihadmadeupmymindtoforgetabouttheartcamp.

Ibeganbydrawingthepinetreesstrongandstraighttrunk,andthenaddedthebeautifulbranches,makingsuretheupperonesliftedgentlytowardsthesun.Lostinmywork,IjumpedwhenIheardMr.Westonspeakup,“You’vedoneagreatjobshowingthestrengthofthattreeonpaper.”

“Thanks,”Ismiled,glancingup.

AsIdrewtheneedlestothebranches,Mr.WestontoldmesomethingIneverknewaboutpines:Ifyouplanttherootballtoodeep,thetreedies.Theirrootsgrowout,notdown—togetenoughwaterandgrowtall.

“Youhaveagoodeye,Tessa.”Withthesewords,Mr.Westonnoddedgoodbye.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Hiswordsmademepauseandthink.

Paragraph2:ThenextMonday,Isignedupforthecamp.

情节设计：

Hiswordsmademepauseandthink.

1. 我反思，应该像松树