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Chapter8-RevisingYourRoughDraft9622097ARoger9610801APatrickJosh9610905ARita
8aPrinciplesofRevisionRevisionispartlyapsychologicalandpartlyamechanicalprocess.Psychological:Thekindofadaptationoflanguageandgrammartofitaparticularaudience.
8aPrinciplesofRevisionExample:Everyteacherwantshisstudentstogetgoodgrades.(Theproblemofthepronoun→sexist)SuggestionAllteacherswanttheirstudentstogetgoodgrades.
8aPrinciplesofRevisionMechanical:Therevisionofthebigandlittlemiscuesandmistakes.Thekindoferrors:1.Grammaticalerrors2.Thedetailsofparagraphsaretedious.3.Thecontentswhicharetooweakshouldfindmoredatatosupport.
8a-1RereadingyourwritingAllrevisionisbasedonrereadingThetimeofrereadingyourtextshouldbeatleastthreetimes.
8a-2RevisingthepaperfrombiggesttosmallestManyinstructorsaskstudentstoworktheirrevisionfromthebiggesttosmallest.Itcanmaketheactofrevisionmethodical.Youcannotonlyfindthebiggermistakesandignorethesmallermistakes(suchasthemisspelledwords).
8bRevisingtheopeningparagraphCheckyouropeningparagraphtoseewhetheryourbeginningissprightlyenoughtoattractyourreader.Checkthethesistobesurethatitisnotmuddledorvague
8b-1RevisingtheintroductionTheopeningparagraphcontainsanintroductionandathesis.Introduction→theinitialsentencesoftheopeningparagraph.Thesis→thefinalsentenceoftheopeningparagraph.
8b-1RevisingtheintroductionA.Useaquotation1.Itcanplungeintoyourthesisimmediately.2.Thequotationcanbeawell-knownsayingoranycommentwhichisrelatedtoyourthesis.3.Thequotationneedtobesuitableandcanleadnaturallytoyourthesis.
B.AskaquestionItcanletyoutoleadyourreaderstothedirectionyouwanttogo.
C.Presentanillustration1.Tousetheanecdotesorexamplesarethepopularopenings.2.Thesekindsofopeningsarethetruth,soitisalsoeasytoc
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