考研直通车英语专属作文测评二.pptxVIP

2015考研直通车英语专属作文测评（二）（包含英语一和英语二）朱伟关键字：梦想，抗挫折能力，充分准备，迎难而上Anexcitingstoryoftengoeslikethis:itisnotpossibleforanyonetogothroughtheriverbyabrokenwoodbridge.Then,aweakbutbravesnailisexpectedtoflylikeabirdandgettotheothersideoftheriverwithoutanyaccident.Unfortunately,storyisasstorydoes.Thetruthisthislittlecuteanimal,evenwithahistorythousandsofyearslongerthanhumanbeings’,wouldputitsfateonthelineanddroptotheriverprobably.Thestory,asthecartoonshows,istotellustoreconsidertherelationshipbetweenidealandreality.Sometimeswemaypaintourselvesaverybrilliantblueprintbeforetakinganyinvestigationintothesituation,whichismoreoftenmuchfiercerthanwehaveeverimagined.Hence,whentherealdifficultycomes,wealwaysappearanxiousandevencannotbelievewhatishappeninginfrontofus.Actually,itisthelackofadequatepreparationsratherthanthedifficultyitselfthatresultsinanegativee.Thus,itisessentialtoconsidereverythingpossiblebeforeinitiatingaprogram.Meanwhile,dreamisnotabadthing.Youshouldnevergiveupwhentheaimseemsunexpectable.Afterall,thesnailisstillhangingontheendofthebridge.Thereisachance,isn’tthere?Ifyouassurethatyourlifegoaliselevatingandworthtrying,youjustgoandgetit.英语二重点预测：网上购物（电子书）与实体店购物的销售额比较Shoppingonline(electronicreading)vs.shoppinginthedepartmentstore审题：1.增长率有所放缓；2.虽网购市场趋于成熟，增长率放缓，但其占社会消费品零售的总额将稳步上升，交易规模增长迅猛；3，最后可以看到，网购占社会消费品零售总额的比重仍然偏低，发展空间巨大。随着人们生活条件以及教育水平、网络技术的进一步提升，必将有更好的发展。Simplyandclearly,thissingle-serieschartarrangestheincreasingrateandtheturnoversofChina’son-lineshopping,whichdisplaysasteadyandsounddevelopingtrendovertheperiodfrom2006to2015.Tobeginwith,thecurvelineonthetopshowstheincreasingspeedofvirtualshoppingwillslowdown,withthepeakof128.8%in2008andthenslidingcontinuallytothe