读后续写之情绪描写课件-2023届高考英语写作专项复习.pptx

Enjoythesong;Continuationwriting——Emotion

读后续写之人物情绪描写;读后续写测试的语言能力就是基于语言的表意功能基础上的书面语篇理解能力和表达能力。;四个步骤;读后续写高考真题;(2022新高考1.读后续写)Tomyjoy,Davidslowlyrosetohisfeet./Seeinghisconfidentsmiles,Isighedinrelief.;;(2022新高考1.读后续写)Tomyjoy,Davidslowlyrosetohisfeet./Seeinghisconfidentsmiles,Isighedinrelief.;情绪名词;Let’schant!;引导启发，句型探索·无灵主语;Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmewhenIheardthegoodnews.

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情绪名词

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;EmojisExpression;;happy/joyful/delighted;sad/sorrowful/regretful;angry/mad/annoyed/cross;surprised/amazed/astonished;例句:(感到)紧张和害怕,彼得勉力走上舞台,开始发表演讲。

;例句:尽管很紧张，彼得仍鼓起勇气走上舞台。

;Summary;①无灵主语+时间状语从句:情绪名词+动词+sb+as/whensbdosth.

Uncontrollably,nervousnessoverwhelmedPeterashesteppedontothestage.

②非谓语:情绪形容词1+情绪形客词2,sbdosth,doingsth.

Nervousandslightlyscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.

③让步状语从句:情绪形容词+assb+be动词，sbdosth.

Nervousashewas,Davidpluckedupcourageandmadehiswaytothestage.

;EmotionalInspiration;YourSharing;Homework;1.当意识到如果没有恰当和及时的说服和鼓励,大卫的情况可能会变得更糟,我感到担忧和焦虑。;

第一段概述:我引起David注意;鼓励、说服David参加比赛;David思考后决定完成比赛

?思考:这些情节中，哪些位置适合加情绪描写，用哪种句式?

参考情绪写法:(加在最后“David改变主意/决定参赛之处)

Para1：Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaid__________（情感词1）and________（情感词2）,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstill__________________.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iadded______________________.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtome(颤抖地哭泣)__________________________andexpressedhe__________________________(......决心)tofinishthecross-countryrun.HiscoachheardwhatDavidsaidandgavemea__________(.....的情绪表情)——_________________(更加坚决的情感)thananyoneelse’s.;Thankyou

foryourlistening!;1.当意识到如果没有恰当和及时的说服和鼓励,大卫的情况可能会变得更糟