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四级作文课堂辅导教案

四级作文课堂辅导教案

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四级作文课堂辅导教案

一、作文评分标准

1.本题满分为15分。

2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分与14分。各有标准样卷1至2份。

3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似,即定为该分数（即8分）;若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加1分（即9分）或减1分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。

4.评分标准:

2分—条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。一塌糊涂

5分—基本切题。表达思路不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。糊里糊涂

8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。马马虎虎

11分—切题。表达思路清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。清清楚楚

14分—切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。漂漂亮亮

二、阅卷实例

题目:BicyclesAnImportantMeansofTransportinChina.

提纲:

（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普与

（2）和汽车的比较

（3）自行车在中国的前途

Score:14

BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople-manandwoman,oldandyoung-ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalledthekingdomofbicycles.

Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.

Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.

Score:11

TheremillionsofbicyclesintodaysChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeoplesdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttheridersstrength,biyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.

Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcoun