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“Ada!Milk!”Mamacalled.

Milk.ItwasAda’sturntogetit.Adasighedandshutherfirst-aidbook.Herheadhurtfromreadinginthedimmorninglight,buthowelsewasshegoingtolearn?

Adatiedthecowclosetoatree.Somewheredownthemountain,somevolunteerdoctorswereteachingmedicalskillstovillagenurses.AdaheardBettydriveoffhoursago.“Sheshouldhavetakenmewithher.ShethinksI’mtooyoung,butshe’swrong.Iamalready16!”Adathought.

AdacarriedthemilkbacktoMama,thenwandereduptheroad.Roy,avillageboy,hadgottenadonkey,andsomekidshadgatheredaroundtoseeit.Roywasalwaysdoingsomethingtogetattention.Likenow:hewastryingtostandontheanimal’sbareback.

“Nowondertheydon’ttrustkidswithanythingimportant”,Adathought,sighing.Shehadjustturnedawaywhensheheardathudandafewscreams.Roylayonthegroundnearbymoaninginpain.Thedonkeystoodseveralmetersaway.“Roy!”Thekidsnearbyrantowardshim.“GetBetty,”onesaid.Adashookherhead.“Betty’sgonetothecity.”Theotherkidsseemedfrozeninplace.

AdarantowhereRoywaslying.Shedroppedtoherkneesonthedustyroad.Roy!Canyouhearme?”Roymoanedinagony.Adasawthatoneofhislegswascrooked,bentalittlesidewaysbetweenthekneeandtheankle.Abrokenleg!

Sherememberedwhatthefirst-aidbookhadsaidaboutbrokenlegs:ifthereisnoambulance,straightenthebonebeforemovingthevictim.Therecertainlywouldn’tbeanyambulancehere.Adalookedbackuptheroad.Theotherkidswerestillstandingthere,watching.“Victor!”Adacalledtooneoftheboys.“GogetRoy’smama,andfindsomeonewithatruck.”Sheturnedtotheothers.

“Givemeyourshirts.Weneedsomethingtotiehislegwith.”

Adathenfoundastrongstick,whichshewouldusetokeephislegstraight.

Thenextday,BettycametoAda’shome.

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记叙文。文章讲述主人公Ada生活在一个医疗和教育条件都比较差的村庄