作文1分析和总结.docx

范文赏析(一)

1.MyViewonFakeCommodities (1998.1)

假冒伪劣商品的危害。

怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。

MyViewonFakeCommodities

Nowadaysfakecommoditieshavefloodedalmostevery inchofthemarket.Wherever youare,whateveryoudo,itseemsthatyoucanhardlyhavefallenpreytothem.Inotherwords,itishighlyprobablethatyouhaveboughtsomeofthosefakegoodsorproductsofinferiorquality。

Needlesstosay,fakecommoditieshavealreadydonegreatharmtooursociety.Ontheonehand,theywillruinthegoodreputationofgenuineproductsanddisturbthebalanceofthemarket.Ontheotherhand,theprevalenceofsuchproductshashinderedinterpersonalrelationshipandresultedinthedeclineofpublicmorality.Asaconsequence,theyhavewastedexhaustibleresources,endangeredpeople’spreciouslifeandhealth,andinthelongrunerodedpublictrust。

Then,whatshouldbedonetodoawaywithfakecommodities?Tostartwith,thegovernmentneedstotightenitsinspectionprogramandstrengthenitsenforcementpolicies.Secondly,honestbusinessmenshouldmodifysomelong-acceptedpracticesattheprotectionoftheirintellectualpropertyright.Mostimportantofall,weconsumerswillhavetodoabetterjoboflearninghowtodistinguishbetweenthegenuineandthephoneyanddefinitelysaynotothefakeones.Inoneword,thecoordinatedeffortofthewholesocietywillputanendtofakecommodities.

2009年6月六级作文预测（恩波英语研究所）

（一）UniversityStudents’PursuitofFamousBrands

1. 现在很多大学生都追求穿名牌，用名牌; 2.你对这种现象的看法

审题概述●这是一篇论述对大学生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，详述大学生热衷追求、使用名牌的情形以及人们的看法。第二段，重点谈你对此的看法。UniversityStudents’PursuitofFamousBrands

―Whatperfumesareyouwearing?‖―Aren’tyourshoesNike’slatestrelease?‖―IliketheMickeybagyouboughtyesterday.‖―IheartheJackJonesstoreisonsalethisweek.Doyouwannacomealong?‖Don’tfeelsurprisedifyouhearthemcomingoutofthemouthofcollegestudents.It’squitecommontohearandseecollegestudentsswappinginformationabo