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（人与动物类）雪中救马

目录故事线01.范文；下水作文02.类似话题对比（人与动物类）03.语言表述积累04.

01.故事线

Benracedoutofschool.Christmasholidays!Whenhegothome,hewenttocheckonhispony,Scout.HeslippedhimacandyandScoutnuzzled(用口鼻轻擦)hisshoulder.BenstartedtowardthehouseandfoundhisolderbrotherJackstartingthesnowmobile(雪地机动车)todelivergastoUncleMike.Benjumpedonthebackandjoinedhim.Theysetoffslowly.Thesnowwasfreshanddeepontheremotemountainpath.Whentheyarived,Jackwentoverwiththegascan.Benlookedupthemountainandsawsomethingmoving.Hegotbinoculars(望远镜)andsawtwoanimals.Coulditbeahorse?JackclimbedbackonthesnowmobileandaskedBentoleave.WhenBentoldJackhesawhorsesuponthesnowytrees,Jackdidn’tbelieveit.Benlookedbackupthemountain,buthecouldntseeanything.AtdinnerBentoldhisfatherhesawtwohorsesuponthemountaintoday.Iftheyarehorses,theymustbetrappedbyallthissnow.saidhisdad.“Iftheyretrapped,wehavetodosomething,saidBen,hisvoicerising.HisdadlookedatJack.“Well,inthemorninggoandtakealook.Takethegunandsomehay(干草).Iftheylookasiftheycansurvive,givethemthehay.Ifnot...”Jacklookedserious,andslowlynodded.Benknewwhatthegunwasfor,andhischestwentcold.Inthemoningtheysetoffinthecoldsnow.WhentheygottotheplacewhereBenhadseenthehorses,theystoppedandlookedupusingbinoculars.Nohorses.Theywaitedforafewminutes.Iseethem.Theyrehorses.Letstakethesnowmobileupthere.Bensuddenlyexclaimed.Theydrovethesnowmobileinthedeepsnowandfinallyreachedtheplace.“Ohno!saidBen.“Theyrestarving!Oneofthehorseshadlostalotofhair,andtheirtailswerealmostgone.Theireyeswerelifelessandtired.Jackwalkedaroundthehorses.Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.

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