2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+男子在漂流途中遇到一只郊狼幼崽+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习男子在漂流途中遇到一只郊狼幼崽1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Amanonarafting(竹筏漂流)tripinSaskatchewansavedacoyotepup(郊狼幼仔)fromdrowning(淹死)andnurseditbacktohealthduringhis10-dayoutdoortrip.Justinwasinamulti-dayraftingtripdowntheRedDeerandSouthSaskatchewanrivers“whenheheardsomenoise,theWildlifeRehabilitationCenterofSaskatchewanwroteinanInstagrampost.Hesaiditsoundedlikeadogfightsoheparkedhisrafttofindoutwhatwasgoingon.However,hewasntabletoseeanythingsohewentbacktohisrafttogofishing.4

续写原文Whilehewasfishing,heheardsomethinginthewatercryingout-andthatwaswhenhesawsomekindofanimalswimmingintheriver!ItsnosewashardlyabovethewaterandthewaterwassodarkthatJustincouldnttellwhatkindofanimalitwasatfirst.Justintriedtoreachfortheanimalbutendedupfallinginthefreezingcoldwateraswell.Luckily,Justinwassomehowabletolocatetheanimal-acoyotepup!-inthewaterandcatchhisraftbeforeitwastakenawaybywaterforgood!5

续写原文WhenJustinbroughttheanimalbacktohisraft,thelittlecoyotepupdidntseemtobebreathing,withitseyesclosed.ThepupwasluckyyetagainasJustinhadfirst-aidknowledgeandwasabletodoaHeimlichtreatmentbypushingonitsstomach.Afterafewpushes,watercameoutofthecoyotesnoseandhewasbreathingagain!JustinandhisnewfriendwerebothwetthroughsotheymadeanefforttoreachlandagainwhereJustinmadeafireandtriedtowarmthelittleguyup.”6

段首句Para1：Justinshortenedthetripoverthenext10orsodaysinordertotakecareofthepupwell.Para2：Finally,Justinwasabletofindaplacewherehecouldgetserviceandcallexpertsforadvice.7

Part2题目分析8

续写原文分析9本文以故事为线索展开，讲述了一名男子在萨斯喀彻温省的一次漂流旅行中救了一只溺水的郊狼幼仔，并在他10天的户外旅行中照顾它，使它恢复了健康。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10

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