四级作文评分标准及样卷1满分15分2分5等2分条理不清思路.pdfVIP

四级作文评分标准及样卷1．满分15分2．分5等2

分：条理不清，思路

四级作文评分标准及样卷

1(满分15分.

2(分5等

2分:条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误，且多数为

严重错误。

5分:基本切题。思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重的语言错误。

8分:基本切题。思想表达比较清楚，文字尚连贯;但语言错误较多，其中有一

些是严重

错误。

11分:切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分:切题。思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误或仅有

个别小错。

注:如题目中给出主题句、起始句和结束句，均不得计入所写字数。

样卷分析:

ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?

1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3.我认为。。。

1(

Currently,campusesofmanyfamousuniversitiesarebecomingoneof

thepopulartouristattractions.Itisreportedthatmoreandmore

peopleenjoytheirholidaysbyvisitingfamousuniversities,suchas

TsinghuaUniversityandPekingUniversity.

Thisphenomenonhasexertedheateddebatesconcerningwhether

universitycampusshouldbeopentotourists.Theyindicatethat

people’sopinionsvaryinabigway.Somepeople

believethatitisagoodthingtoopenuniversitycampusesto

touristswhileothersarguethatitisnot.

Personallyspeaking,I’minfavorofcampustourism.Foronething,

touristsmayderivelotsofenjoymentfromthebeautifulscenesof

famousuniversities.Foranother,thestrongacademicatmospheremay

motivatetourists,particularlystudents,toworkhardperseverewith

theirdreams.Moreover,forfamousuniversities,beingopentotourists

mayserveasaneffectiveapproachtoattracttalentsfromalloverthe

country.Inshort,campustourismwillnotonlybenefittouristsbut

alsodeveloptheuniversities.

2.

Atpresent,alargenumberofpeoplechoosetovisitfamous

universities,suchasTsinghuaUniversityandPekingUniversity.Asa

result,famousuniversitiescampuseshavebecomeoneofthetourist

destinations.

Butshouldtheuniversitycampusbeopentotourists?Astothis

question,peoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkthat

universitycampusesshouldbeopent