Unit 1 People of Achievement Using Language作文评讲课课件+2024-2025学年高中英语人教版选择性必修第一册.pptxVIP

英语家作：

1.完成英语周报第二期，C和D篇阅读不用做。

2.写一篇英语作文“介绍你钦佩的人”，80个单词以上。;本次作文出现的问题：

1.抄袭现象严重。

2.没有分三段来写。

3.作文没有新意。写屠呦呦、爱因斯坦、袁隆平的人很多。

4.作文的逻辑性不强。

5.不交或者没写完整。

;Writeanintroductionaboutsomeoneyouadmire.

admirev.敬佩；钦佩；欣赏

admirationn.钦佩admirableadj.令人敬佩的

1.Choosethepersonyouaregoingtowriteabout.

Itshouldbesomeoneyouthinkisgreatinsomeway.

Itcanbeanordinaryperson,suchasaparent,arelative,orafriend.

2.Mayalistofthingsthatneedtobeincludedinyourintroduction.

3.Useyournotestowriteyourintroductionandsumuphowyoufeelaboutthisperson.

;ThepersonIadmiremostis_______(人）.Bornin_______(地点/时间）,_______（人），whoisoneofthegreatest_______(职业）,showedapassionfor___________(方面）

Aftergraduatingfrom__________(学校）,he/shespentmostofhis/hertimeindoing/on___________.Despitemanydifficulties,he/shemanagedtoovercomethem.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessin_________,whichmadehim_____________(成就）.

Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.;ThepersonIadmiremostisYuanLongping.BorninBeijingin1930,YuanLongping,whoisoneofthegreatestscientist,showedapassionforresearchingrice.

AftergraduatingfromSouthwestAgriculturalCollege,hespentmostofhistimeonagriculturalteachingandresearch.Despitemanydifficulties,hemanagedtoovercomethem.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessinbreedinghybridrice,whichimprovedthericeproductionandhelpedridtheworldofhunger.Soheisknownasthefatherofhybridrice.

Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.;小作文衔接词

第一点：Firstofall/Firstly/Firstandforemost/Aboveall/Tostartwith

第二点：Secondly/Moreimportantly/What’smore

第三点：Thirdly/Finally/Lastbutnotleast/Inaddition/Besides

总结：I