新人教7浙江高考英语作文冲刺强化训练市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptVIP

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当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有些人选择看电影，有些人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文:1.看电影:省时、有趣、易懂2.读原著:细节更多、语言优美3.我见解及理由注意:1.词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出。2.参考词汇:originalwork/bookintheoriginal（原著）浙江高考书面表示第2页第2页

理解得分,力争拿高分平均得分13.96考生332624分值百分比分值百分比分值百分比03.9%113.3%211.7%12%125.3%221.6%21.3%137.5%231.5%31.1%149%240.3%44%1510.2%250.2%51%169.2%260.1%61.3%178.3%270.1%71.9%188.3%2881.7%197.7%2992.8%203.6%30104.2%第3页第3页

抄阅读文章中句子;不知所云.得分为0分第4页第4页

语言素质欠缺;基本功差;语句毛病多;大小写;标点符号;书写不清等等;得6分.第5页第5页

卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分第6页第6页

语言不地道;中文式思维;词汇错误;卷面有涂改;得20分.第7页第7页

有少许语言错误;得27分第8页第8页

Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhat’smore,Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor’sideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.?It’sasample!第9页第9页

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SentencestructuresandvocabularyUsecorrecttensesandcontainalltherelatedpointsMakethesentencestructuresvariedandwordsorphrasesspecial.3.OrganizethewritingwellwithproperdiscoursemarksTensespointsDiscoursemarkersDiscussion:Howtogethighermarks?第11页第11页

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