译林版高考英语一轮总复习精品课件 写作分册 读后续写 第二节 读后续写典例分析-第一讲 人与社会.ppt

第二节读后续写典例分析第一讲人与社会

1典例分析2拓展训练

根据《普通高中英语课程标准》，人与社会类写作包含的子主题主要有同伴交往、友好互助、相互尊重、尊长爱幼等，引导同学们树立社会责任和共享的正确价值观。所以，在人与社会类的读后续写中要体现核心主题，切忌与主题相悖。

01典例分析

（2024·山东潍坊阶段检测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lionel，FandiandIskandaroftengottogethertoplayfootball.Theydreamtofonedaygrowinguptobeprofessionalfootballers.Theemptyfieldbesidetheblockofneighbourhoodwaswheretheywouldmeetfortheirfootballsessions.

Onesunnyafternoon，theywereatthefieldasusual.TheywereinthethickoftheirgamewhenFandiaimedhisfootattheballandgaveaforcefulkick.Hehimselfwassurprisedbyhisstrength.Theballflewpastthegoalpostsbreakingintoaglasswindowofthehousebehind.Theboysweretooshockedforwords.Theywerehalfexpectingtheannoyedhomeowner，MadamLeong，tostormoutthroughthefrontdoorandgivethemagoodtonguecriticizing.Theyknewshewasanill-temperedoldlady.Actually，shehadscolded（责骂）themseveraltimesbeforeforbeingtoonoisy.

Whennoonecameoutofthehouseaftertenminutes，theboyswerequitesurprised.Theyhadpreparedthemselvesforascoldingandwerereadytocompensate（赔偿）MadamLeongforbreakingherwindow.Outofcuriosity，FandiadventuredintoMadamLeong’syard.Thegatewasunlockedandhewentinwhiletheothertwowaitedoutside.Fandiknockedonthemaindoor.Noreply.Lookinginthroughthebrokenwindow，Fandiletoutaloudscream.Lyingonthefloorinapoolofbloodwastheoldlady.Therewasabigcutonherforehead.Shemusthavebeencutbypiecesofglass，flyingacrossthelivingroom.

Inpanic，Fandiimmediatelydialled“911”foranambulance.Astheywereunabletoenterthehousewithoutakey，therewasnothingtheycoulddobutwaitfortheambulancetoarrive.Althoughtheambulancearrivedsoon，totheboys，theannoyingwaitseemedlikeforever.TheambulanceattendantsforcedthedooropenandrushedtoMadamLeong.Shewasunconscious，butstill