专题09 书面表达（上海专用）（解析版）.docx

专题09书面表达（15篇）

1．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）请以“ThatDay,IsolvedaTrouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。

Thefollowingquestionsareforyourreference:

*Whattroubledidyoumeetwith?

*Howdidyousolvethetrouble?

*Whatdidyoulearnfromthisexperience?

注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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【答案】例文：

Thatday,Isolvedatrouble

SinceIbecameaGrade9student,Ihavehadacolourfulschoollife.However,Istillmeetwithsometroubles.Oneday,itwasmygrandma’seightiethbirthday.Itwasreallyameaningfuldayformyfamily.Sincemyparentswereoccupiedwiththedecorationofthehouse,theyaskedmetoorderacake.However,IwassocarelessthatIleftthematterbehindmymindwhenmyfriendsinvitedmetoplaybasketballthatday.Ifeltsorryforthat,butIdidn’tlosemyselfinself-blame.Imadeahandmadecakewithcookiesandcolourfulcandies.Grandmawasveryhappywhenshesawthespecialcake.

Whenterriblethingshappen,whatweshoulddoisnottofindfaultwithothers,buttouseourintelligentbraintosolvethem.Inourdailylife,thereareoccasionswhenwearefacedwithsomethingunpleasant.Andself-blame,whichisalwaysthefirstchoiceofsomepeople,isreallyoflittleuseinsolvingtheproblems.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：根据所给的问题提示，讲述你解决一个麻烦的经历，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，直入主题，交代事情发生的时间，地点和经过，以及是如何解决的；

第二步，讲述自己从这次经历中获得了什么。

[亮点词汇]

①beoccupiedwithsth忙于做某事

②leave...behind把……遗留在

③playbasketball打篮球

④not...but不是……而是……

[高分句型]

①SinceIbecameaGrade9student,Ihavehadacolourfulschoollife.??(since引导的时间状语从句)

②IwassocarelessthatIleft