2025届高考英语专项复习 破解读后续写难题：动作情节（素材）.docx

破解读后续写难题：动作情节

学生们在读后续写的过程中常常无从下笔，感觉思路卡住，甚至觉得无话可说。除了句子的表达之外，细节描写同样至关重要。一个富有层次感的动作链，往往能为文章增色不少，吸引阅卷老师的注意，甚至让整个情节更加生动、饱满。

一个有趣、紧张或感人的情节，离不开动作细节的描写。而这些细节，往往是学生们最容易忽视的部分。

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遇到火灾/水灾/雪灾/地震/洪水

动作链：感到环境异常→察觉危险信号（如烟雾、轰鸣声）→确认危险来源→迅速评估逃生路线→紧急撤离，避开高危区域→抵达安全地点后确认情况

例子：

Shesuddenlynoticedthesmellofsomethingburning,athickhazeformingintheair→Asshelookedaround,thedistantcracklingsoundoffireconfirmedherfear→Thekitchenwasablaze,andtheflameswerequicklyspreading→Withoutwastingtime,sheevaluatedhersurroundings,mappingoutthefastestexit→Grabbingherphoneandkeys,shesprintedtowardthefrontdoor,makingsuretoavoidthespreadingflames→Finallyoutside,shestoppedatasafedistanceanddialed911,watchingthesmokeriseintothesky.

2

各种灾难救人

动作链：听到微弱的求救声→确认具体位置→评估救援所需工具→利用工具打开救援通道→确保伤者情况稳定→带伤者撤离至安全地点

例子：

Throughthechaosofthecollapsingbuilding,heheardafaintcryforhelpbeneaththerubble→Hecroucheddownandlistenedintently,locatingthesourceunderapileofbricks→Realizingthatheneededmorethanjusthishands,hequicklyfoundasturdymetalrodnearby→Withmeasuredforce,hepriedopenthedebrispiecebypiece,wideningthegapjustenoughtopullthetrappedvictimfree→Checkingforanyvisibleinjuries,hegentlyliftedthepersonontohisback→Hecarefullynavigatedthroughthewreckageandbroughtthemtoaclear,safeareawheretheycouldbothcatchtheirbreath.

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各种灾难求救

动作链：意识到脱困无望→评估可用工具和资源→利用电话或信号设备发出求救→设法保持身体和情绪稳定→时刻保持警觉，准备迎接救援

例子：

Astherisingfloodwatersurroundedher,shequicklyrealizedtherewasnowaytoswimtosafety→Franticallylookingaround,shespottedabrokenpieceoffurniturefloatingnearbyandclungtoit→Withherotherhand,sheretrievedherwaterproofphonefromherpocketanddialedforhelp→Knowingthatrescuecouldtaketime,shepositionedherselfsecurelyonthemakeshiftraft,tryingtoconserveherenergy→Thedistanthum