2025年译林版六年级下册英语Unit 1单元写作提优专训.pptx

Unit1

Thelionandthemouse;温馨提示：点击进入讲评;一、方法指导

描述配图故事,可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步开头,引出故事时间;第二步正文,具体说明其地点、人物以及故事经过三要素;第三步结尾,介绍故事的结局。;二、素材积累;?;三、以读促写(阅读范文,用数字1-5给下列图片排序,体悟写法)

Oneday,afatherandhissonwalkedbackhomewiththeirdonkey.Theymetanoldwoman.Sheasked,“Whyistheboywalking?Hecanridethedonkey.”Thefatherthenputhissononthedonkey.;Soon,theymetanoldman.Theoldmantalkedtotheboy,“Youaretoolazy.Yourfatheristired.”Sothefathergotonthedonkeyandthesonwalked.

Theymetayoungwoman.Shesaid,“Youarefoolish!Whydon’tyoutworidethedonkeytogether?”Thesongotonthedonkey,too.;Theymetayoungman.Hesaid,“Youaretooheavy!Youwillkillthedonkey.Whyareyousounkindtoanimals?”Finally,theycarriedthedonkeyontheirshoulders.Everybodylaughedatthem.

Thefathersaidtohisson,“Youcan’tmakeeveryonehappy.”;1;四、小试身手(参照以上范文,自己动手写一写吧)

请你根据图片提示,用英语写一篇小故事,不少于五句话。

提示：fox狐狸;crow乌鸦;apieceofmeat一块肉;falldown掉下来

Oneday,acrowsatinatree.She

_________________________________

_________________________________;______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________