专题05 应用文（第2期）-2024届江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编（教师版）.docx

专题05应用文（第2期）

2024届江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编

【2024·江苏省徐州市南通市六校联合调研】假定你是高三学生李华，在上周的年级读后续写竞赛中，你的续写得分为16分（满分25分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给评委Mr.Davis用英语写一份邮件，内容包括：

1.说明问题；

2.给出理由。

参考词汇：读后续写continuationwriting

DearMr.Davis,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearMr.Davis,

??IamLihua,aparticipantinyoucontinuationwritingcompetition.Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,Ifeltitunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.

??Formywriting,Ifeltittotallymeetstherequirementputforwardinthecontest.Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.Additionally,thewordsandsentencesusedarecolorful,withoutrepeatedlyusingthesamewordagainandagain.Ievenwrotesomecompoundsentencestoupdatemywriting,suchasattributiveclause,theemphaticpattern,invertedsentenceandsoon.Finally,awell-knownsayingisusedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.

??Inaword,withthemeritsmentionedabove,IwonderwhyIgotsuchalowscore.Ifitisconvenientforyou,pleasegivemeanexplanation.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【解析】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生代替李华给续写竞赛的评委老师写一封邮件，陈述自己续写得分为16分，觉得此分数偏低不太合理的理由。

1.词汇积累：

陈述：state→makeastatementof

而且：additionally→what’smore/inaddition/furthermore

完美的：perfect→excellent/outstanding

2.句式拓展：

同义句转换

原句：Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.

拓展句：Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclear,withtheplotdevelopingreas