高考英语复习读后续写练习即使物质上很贫瘠，也要以积极的态度面对生活课件(共20张PPT).pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习即使物质上很贫瘠，也要以积极的态度面对生活

题目再现题目分析范文呈现努力方向读后续写

Part1题目呈现

Onthewaybackfromworkeveryevening,therewouldbeahomelessmanstandingattheexitofthefreeway.Helookedtobeinhislate40sbutwasprobablyalotyounger.Hiseyeswerewhatstruckmethemostabouthim,theywerebrownandtheyhadasparkle.Peoplesaytheycantellalotfromapersonseyes.Itwascertainlytrueinhiscase.Healwayswavedateverycar,hewasalwayshappyandsmilingandsometimesalmostdancing.EverydayafterworkIwouldremembertogatheranysparechangeandquicklyrolldownmywindowandgivehimthecoins.Occasionallytheredlightwouldbeonforaminuteandwewouldaskeachotheraboutourday.续写原文

Hisanswerwouldalwaysbethesame,“Imblessed!”.Iknewwhathisanswerwasgoingtobeeverytime,yetIwouldstillask.Itamazedmethateveninhissituationofbeinghomelesshewassopositive,andhisanswerwouldremindmeofhowblessedIwas.Asinglemotheroffouramazingkids,withaplacetocallhomeandwithajobtoprovideformykids.ThenonedayIwascalledintomybosssofficeandwastoldthatIwasbeinglaidoffduetotheeconomy.Fortherestofthatday,afeelingofworryengulfed(淹没)me.NeedlesstosaythatonmywayhomethatdayIwasverysadandupset.IdidntremembertolookformysparechangeandkeepitreadylikeIusuallydid.Buttherehewasasalways,asIturnedtheramp(斜坡).Hesethiseyesonme,whilestillsmilingandwavingatothers.续写原文

Para1:Idhopedtocatchthegreenlight,butImissedit.Para2:Whathegavemewasmorethanadollarbill.段首句6

Part2题目分析

本文以人物为线索展开。作者每天都能看着一个脸上洋溢着笑容的无家可归的男士，在回家的路上，她会将多余的零钱给他，并和他互相问候。直到有一天，她被解雇了，就在她不知所措时，这位男士给了她一美元，从这件事中，她明白了，即使物质上很贫瘠，也要以积极的态度面对生活。续写原文分析

点1:位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2:位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3:位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4:文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。段首句2点2点3点4(升华)情节构建的重点段首句1点1续写第一段续写第二段9

Para1:Idhopedtoca