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发展共同体联考续写分析

WewerenearthemountaintopofTupendowhenarockgotmovedandhitmylowerleghalfwaybetweenankleandknee.Theimpactcutthroughbothbonesandremovedabigchunk(块)ofmyleg.Ifoundmyselfhangingfromarope,1,600mofftheground,insharppain.Iwasafraiditmightjustdropoff.

Afterbindingittoanice-axe,myclimbingpartnerabseileddown(缘绳下降)togethelp.FortwodaysIlayalone.Mylegstartedtosmellprettybad.

IttooksixdaystogetmeoffthemountainandtoahospitalinnorthernIndia.ThehospitalwasbasicandthenextdayIwasflowntoDelhiforemergencysurgeryandthen,whenstableenough,backhome.IntheUK,afternineoperations,mydoctorrecommendedanamputation(截肢)ifIwantedtobeabletowalkproperlyagain.

Iwasverysad.IhadbeencompetinginsportsinceIwasateenager.MyphysicalfitnessandloveofrunningfeltasiftheywereaninseparablepartofthepersonIwas.Ivisitedacenterspecializinginprosthesesandtheconsultantthereseemedterriblyenthusiasticaboutmyprospectsasanamputee,tellingmeIwouldbewalkingwithinsixmonthsandmaybeevenplayingfootballafterayear.Ifoundtheexperiencetoodepressingforwordsandwasdeterminedtoputoffthedecisionforaslongaspossible.

EverynightIhadthesamedream:Iwouldbehobblingalongagrassypathusingmycrutches(拐杖)andthensuddenly,IwouldliftthemupandthrowthemintheriverandIdstartwalking,andthenrunning,asiftherehadneverbeenanythingwrong.WhenIwokeitwouldtakemeafewsecondstoremember.

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Iboughtanexercisebikeanduseditfor30minutesthreetimesaweek.

Almost4yearsaftermyaccident,Ienteredalocalhalfmarathon.

mydoctorrecommendedanamputation(截肢)ifIwantedtobeabletowalkproperlyagain.

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Iwasverysad.IhadbeencompetinginsportsinceIwasateenager.Myphysicalfitnessandloveofrunning