【读后续写】2021年11月稽阳联考读后续写讲评：Saving the Daisies 名师课件-陈星可 (1).pptx

2021年11月暨阳联考读后续写讲评SavingtheDaisies陈星可浙江省天台中学

试题呈现：Atdawn,Tayloropenedhersleepyeyesandlookedoutofthewindowatthefoggyfieldbelow.“NO!shecried,nowfullyawake.ButtermilkthecowwasinMamasdaisypatch(雏菊地).“Imusthaveforgottentolockthegatelastnight,”Taylorthoughtasshepulledasweateroverherhead.Mamawasplanningtoselldaisybouquets(花束)atthefairnextweek,butButtermilkwaseatingtheflowers.Taylorhurriedoutsideandgrabbedtheleadropeonthewall.“Whycantyoustayinthefield?”shecalledtoButtermilkassheheadedacrosstheyardtothedaisypatch.Buttermilkstillstoodtherechewingflowers.Annoyed,Taylorthoughttoherself,“WhenIgrewup,I’llbeanartistandpaintpicturesallday.I’llneverownacow.Toomuchtrouble.”JustasTaylorwasabouttothrowtheleadropeontoButtermilkscollar,thefamilydog,Red,roundedthecornerofthehouse.Startled,Buttermilktookoff,tearingthroughthedaisiesandacrosstheyard.Shefinallyran

试题呈现：throughtheopengateandintothefield.“Thankgoodness!”Taylorsaidassheclosedthegateandsecuredthelock.Sheturnedtolookattheflowergarden,wheremostofthedaisieswereeithereatenortrampled(踩踏).Mamacameoutofthehouse.“Whatsgoingon?”sheasked.Shelookedsadlyathergarden.“Iforgottolockthegate,”Taylorsaid.“Imsosorry.”“Iknowyouare.”MamasighedandgaveTaylorahug.“Youlearnedanimportantlessontoday.”Taylor’sheartwasheavyasshewentbackintothehouse.Shehadtothinkofawaytomakeituptohermother.Paragraph1:Suddenly,apaintingonthewallcaughtTaylor’seye._______________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Themorningofthefair,TaylorcamedownstairstoinviteMamatoseethesurprise.______________________________________

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