【知识精研】高考英语复习读后续写练习+吉姆的足球之憾：输球后的内心波澜+课件.pptx

高考英语读后续写语篇练习吉姆的足球之憾：输球后的内心波澜1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Jimstaredatthegroundandsighedindisappointment.PlayersfromtheopposingteamracedpastJim,celebratingtheirshockingvictory.They’dscoredthegame-winninggoaljustsecondsbeforetheendofthegame.“Justonewordtodescribealosslikethat,”JimmumbledtohisteammateDevin.“Terrible!”Devinsighed.“Itwasatoughone.”Hetrotted(小步快跑)towardthemiddleofthefieldtoshakehandswiththewinningteam.JimwalkedslowlybehindDevin.Heunhappilyslappedhandswiththewinners,andthenstoppedtoshuthiseyesastheautumnaircooledhissweatyface.“Terrible,”herepeatedtohimselfashesatonthebenchandpulledhisjacketon.“Let’sgetsomehotchocolateandwatchthenextgame,”Devinsaid.TherewereeightteamsintheYMCAleague,sogameswouldgoonallmorning.“Sorry.I’mheadinghome,”Jimsaid,“I’vehadenoughsoccerfortoday.”4

续写原文Ashereachedthegate,Jimglancedbacktoseethenexttwoteamstakethefield.Theywerejumpingandshouting,excitedtoplay.“Thatwasusalittlewhileago,beforewewerediscouraged.”Jimthought.Sowhywelostthegameatlast?Jimaskedhimself.Howdidsuchawell-playedgameendupwithsuchaterribleresult?Itwasstillclearinhishead:JimhadtheballdeepontheJets’sideofthefield,lookingforDevinoranotherteammatetopassto.HisteamhadoutplayedtheJetsformostofthegame,butfailedwithinthelastseconds.Jimletoutadeepbreath.Themorningwasgrowingwarmer.Perfectforsoccer.Jimlookedbacktowardthefield.Hecouldn’tseeit,buthecouldheartheexcitedvoicesasthegamecontinued.5

段首句Para1:Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.Para2:TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8主题围绕一场足球比赛失利后吉姆的情绪反应和内心思考展开。核心内容是吉姆所在球队在比赛即将结束时被对方进球，输掉比赛。吉姆心情沮丧，与队友交流失利感受，在经历一系列情绪波动后开始反思比赛失败原因，尽管比赛大部分时间表现出色，但最后