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Hesucceededinenteringcollegeandkeptwriting.Severalyearsaftergraduatingfromcollege,hehadhisfirstbookpublished.Withmorebookscomingout,hebecamefamousasawriterinhiscountry.AndheowedhissuccesstoMrsBrown’sencouragement.Withoutherencouragement,hislifemightbeverydifferentnow.Inspiredbyhisownlifestory,Daviddecidedtodosomethingforthatboy.????Themotherwasashamedwhensheheardthat.????写作指导该写作部分为读后续写,原文主要内容是David路上碰到一个被妈妈骂作stupid,goodatnothing的男孩,David由此想到了自己的经历:在中学时,他曾经缺乏自信,被别人说成goodatnothing,英语老师MrsBrown对他的一次写作作业的表扬使他获得自信。他再次写故事交给老师,没想到再次被老师表扬,后来David成为校报编辑,最后成功考入大学,并成为一名作家。他把这一切归功于他的老师MrsBrown的鼓励,所以他决定用自己的经历去帮助这个男孩。续写部分第一段的首句提到David决定为男孩做点什么。关于David可能要做的事情,考生有足够的想象空间。续写部分第二段首句提到男孩的妈妈听到David的话后感到羞愧。考生可以续写妈妈接下来会怎么做?感谢David?向儿子道歉?还是有其他可能?考生根据自己的理解续写,使故事更完整。范文展示Inspiredbyhisownlifestory,Daviddecidedtodosomethingforthatboy.Hewenttothewoman,whoimmediatelyrecognisedhimbecauseshehadreadhisbooksandseenhispictures.Davidstartedtochatwithher.Hetoldherthatwhatshesaidtoherboywasnotappropriate.ThenhetoldherabouttheencouragementheoncegotfromMrsBrown.Intheend,hesaid,“Icouldn’thavebecomeawriterifIhadbelievedIwasgoodatnothing.”Themotherwasashamedwhensheheardthat.Sherealisedthatsheshouldn’thavesaidhersonwasstupid,whichwouldmakehimloseconfidence.Soshesaid,“Thankyouforyouradvice.I’llneversaysuchthingstohimagain.Instead,I’llfindoutwhatheisgoodatandencouragehim.”Thewomanthenleftwiththeboy.Lookingatthebackoftheboy,Davidfeltrelieved,hopinghisactioncouldmakesomedifferencetotheboy.范文点评续写部分合乎原文的逻辑,顺理成章。文章中用了定语从句whoimmediatelyrecognisedhim和whichwouldmakehimloseconfidence,以及what引导的主语从句wh